john mackentash Posted April 22 Share Posted April 22 (edited) Share link for the faction Application: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GNXonVNrOB-kSMY8roA9MtV-G8Y2F-SPxNPyh256Mt4/edit?usp=sharing Edited April 22 by john mackentash 4 3 1 Link to comment
Mickey Lunestra Posted April 22 Share Posted April 22 -1 shit rpers, snitched on them in rudaj once and got called a pedo and mfs said they knew me irl. This is just a even worse rudaj remake since these guys got pked before 5 Link to comment
RevampedRebel Posted April 23 Share Posted April 23 Imagine rudaj but actually worse. -1 1 Link to comment
Mr. Hashimoto Posted April 23 Share Posted April 23 This is beyond minimalistic in nature. Looks like it was created by wikipedia and no originality when making the application. Should have followed the format and placed the documents later within the application form. -1 2 Link to comment
Mickey Lunestra Posted April 23 Share Posted April 23 Dudes doesn’t reply to criticism just gets his boys to mass X reply’s, perfection Link to comment
Fritz Posted April 23 Share Posted April 23 +1 Faction application is lazy and ass, but I really want a spanish faction so I am +1ing anyways 1 Link to comment
vietnam Posted April 23 Share Posted April 23 2 hours ago, Fritz said: +1 Faction application is lazy and ass, but I really want a spanish faction so I am +1ing anyways sorry i made it and i thoguht it was good 1 Link to comment
vietnam Posted April 23 Share Posted April 23 9 hours ago, Mr. Hashimoto said: This is beyond minimalistic in nature. Looks like it was created by wikipedia and no originality when making the application. Should have followed the format and placed the documents later within the application form. -1 i tried hard to do my best, what do you think i shouldve done with which part as feedback 2 Link to comment
vietnam Posted April 23 Share Posted April 23 20 hours ago, Mickey Lunestra said: -1 shit rpers, snitched on them in rudaj once and got called a pedo and mfs said they knew me irl. This is just a even worse rudaj remake since these guys got pked before yooo wadup nomad yeah we put that behind us lmao im blart i dont hold that against u you were cool lmao that was a nice inside job imo Link to comment
RaeSlaughter Posted Friday at 10:19 PM Share Posted Friday at 10:19 PM -1 not only is the application complete dog shit these guys also have no idea how to rp Link to comment
vietnam Posted Saturday at 06:32 AM Share Posted Saturday at 06:32 AM 8 hours ago, RaeSlaughter said: -1 not only is the application complete dog shit these guys also have no idea how to rp what can i do to make this application any better? looking for constructive criticism Link to comment
allholyheaven Posted Saturday at 09:44 AM Share Posted Saturday at 09:44 AM 3 hours ago, vietnam said: criticism you mean just criticism? Link to comment
vietnam Posted Saturday at 01:30 PM Share Posted Saturday at 01:30 PM 3 hours ago, allholyheaven said: you mean just criticism? yes siree Link to comment
Hg0tros Posted Saturday at 01:57 PM Share Posted Saturday at 01:57 PM -1 Nigga tf is that Link to comment
Jaboinkle Posted Monday at 01:26 AM Share Posted Monday at 01:26 AM +1 they played basketball with me 1 1 Link to comment
john mackentash Posted Monday at 04:51 PM Author Share Posted Monday at 04:51 PM MY FACTION AND I WOULD LIKE TO DELETE THIS FACTION APPLICATION AND SUBMIT ANOTHER ONE WITHIN 2 WEEKS AND MAKE IT BETTER Link to comment
john mackentash Posted Monday at 07:17 PM Author Share Posted Monday at 07:17 PM and i would like some comments on how to make it better Link to comment
Geo_Zeus Posted 21 hours ago Share Posted 21 hours ago On 4/27/2026 at 10:17 PM, john mackentash said: and i would like some comments on how to make it better Check other apps that got accepted, see what they did and get an idea of what the community wants to see. Link to comment
Paulie Zazzara Posted 1 hour ago Share Posted 1 hour ago +1 This is super cool and lots of good rp people in it. I love seeing them around with the Puerto Rican flags and the basketball. Would be a good edition as there is no South American Cartel right now. Link to comment
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