john mackentash Posted April 22 Posted April 22 (edited) Share link for the faction Application: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GNXonVNrOB-kSMY8roA9MtV-G8Y2F-SPxNPyh256Mt4/edit?usp=sharing Edited April 22 by john mackentash 5 3 1
Mickey Lunestra Posted April 22 Posted April 22 -1 shit rpers, snitched on them in rudaj once and got called a pedo and mfs said they knew me irl. This is just a even worse rudaj remake since these guys got pked before 7
Mr. Hashimoto Posted April 23 Posted April 23 This is beyond minimalistic in nature. Looks like it was created by wikipedia and no originality when making the application. Should have followed the format and placed the documents later within the application form. -1 2
Mickey Lunestra Posted April 23 Posted April 23 Dudes doesn’t reply to criticism just gets his boys to mass X reply’s, perfection
Fritz Posted April 23 Posted April 23 +1 Faction application is lazy and ass, but I really want a spanish faction so I am +1ing anyways 1
vietnam Posted April 23 Posted April 23 2 hours ago, Fritz said: +1 Faction application is lazy and ass, but I really want a spanish faction so I am +1ing anyways sorry i made it and i thoguht it was good 1
vietnam Posted April 23 Posted April 23 9 hours ago, Mr. Hashimoto said: This is beyond minimalistic in nature. Looks like it was created by wikipedia and no originality when making the application. Should have followed the format and placed the documents later within the application form. -1 i tried hard to do my best, what do you think i shouldve done with which part as feedback 2
vietnam Posted April 23 Posted April 23 20 hours ago, Mickey Lunestra said: -1 shit rpers, snitched on them in rudaj once and got called a pedo and mfs said they knew me irl. This is just a even worse rudaj remake since these guys got pked before yooo wadup nomad yeah we put that behind us lmao im blart i dont hold that against u you were cool lmao that was a nice inside job imo
RaeSlaughter Posted April 24 Posted April 24 -1 not only is the application complete dog shit these guys also have no idea how to rp
vietnam Posted April 25 Posted April 25 8 hours ago, RaeSlaughter said: -1 not only is the application complete dog shit these guys also have no idea how to rp what can i do to make this application any better? looking for constructive criticism
allholyheaven Posted April 25 Posted April 25 3 hours ago, vietnam said: criticism you mean just criticism?
vietnam Posted April 25 Posted April 25 3 hours ago, allholyheaven said: you mean just criticism? yes siree
john mackentash Posted April 27 Author Posted April 27 MY FACTION AND I WOULD LIKE TO DELETE THIS FACTION APPLICATION AND SUBMIT ANOTHER ONE WITHIN 2 WEEKS AND MAKE IT BETTER
john mackentash Posted April 27 Author Posted April 27 and i would like some comments on how to make it better
Geo_Zeus Posted April 29 Posted April 29 On 4/27/2026 at 10:17 PM, john mackentash said: and i would like some comments on how to make it better Check other apps that got accepted, see what they did and get an idea of what the community wants to see.
Ka1l1lly Posted April 30 Posted April 30 +1 This is super cool and lots of good rp people in it. I love seeing them around with the Puerto Rican flags and the basketball. Would be a good edition as there is no South American Cartel right now.
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