The Hand of Paimon

[Togna Bologna]

Link to original application file -> Faction Application Format - Google Docs

 

Name of Faction: The Hand of Paimon

 

Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 7

 

Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Cult

 

Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): American

 

Name of Character running the faction: Togna Balogna

 

Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): LimpDickStalker

 

Your SteamID: 76561198172421441

 

Your Server playtime: 1mo 1w 3d 18h 23m

 

Do you acknowledge and agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page? (Yes/No): (Yes/No)

 

Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned by us? (Yes/No): (Yes/No)

 

Provide an example of the unique Roleplay your faction will bring to the server/what type of roleplay we can expect from your faction (Images/Videos Preferred):  (__Unique RP Examples - Google Docs__)

 

Provide examples or event ideas to promote activity within your faction and keep people interested. (Reference your unique RP from the question above):  (__Events For Activity Promotion - Google Docs__)

 

Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images):  (__Organization Backstory - Google Docs__)

[MrlogicNova]

11 minutes ago, Togna Bologna said:

 

 

Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Cult

 

 

This is all you need to say for me to -1

[Togna Bologna]

15 minutes ago, MrlogicNova said:

This is all you need to say for me to -1

Constructive criticism is appreciated. The idea of a cult wasn't necessarily the first option, though it is a new flavor or RP in the city compared to everything else we regularly see. 

[JJ_]

41 minutes ago, Togna Bologna said:

Name of Character running the faction: Togna Balogna

alrighttttttt

[bigwillyhumper69]

+1 its time that we impliment more serious factions on the server. Lets remove kosher, and lucchese and replace them with great ideas like these. #unbanjmoorseyandsavediverge

[KingJewMonaclu]

+1 if you'll agree to be a kosher puppet

-1 if not

[Togna Bologna]

22 minutes ago, JJ_ said:

alrighttttttt

First char ever btw   Love the guy.

[Togna Bologna]

18 minutes ago, bigwillyhumper69 said:

+1 its time that we impliment more serious factions on the server. Lets remove kosher, and lucchese and replace them with great ideas like these. #unbanjmoorseyandsavediverge

I love the activity always going out outside of Little Israel / Little Italy. Maybe we would be nearby if we do get the opportunity to integerate?

[Togna Bologna]

Hey man, I'm not gay but $20 is $20, yamean?

3 minutes ago, KingJewMonaclu said:

+1 if you'll agree to be a kosher puppet

-1 if not

 

[calink]

Someone just watched Hereditary, it seems

-1

[Togna Bologna]

25 minutes ago, calink said:

Someone just watched Hereditary, it seems

-1

Never watched it, thanks for the constructive criticism though. 

[Medinator]

so its a cult but nothing in the story has anything cult related whatsoever nor is it tied to the story in any way (god the amount of possibilities in your story of how you couldve pushed it is such a big miss)

togna balogna the name of the leader both application and story... which i shouldnt have to explain why this isnt the best look

nothing cult related in the unique RP ideas/events when theres so many things you could do 

 

-1 was truly interested when saw it was a cult and would love to see an actual cult faction done correctly, its incredibly hard to take it serious with this current story/ideas/etc

there is potential though maybe with more time down the line

Edited 17 hours ago by Medinator

[Togna Bologna]

43 minutes ago, Medinator said:

so its a cult but nothing in the story has anything cult related whatsoever nor is it tied to the story in any way (god the amount of possibilities in your story of how you couldve pushed it is such a big miss)

togna balogna the name of the leader both application and story... which i shouldnt have to explain why this is dumb/bad

nothing cult related in the unique RP ideas/events when theres so many things you could do nothing overall special

 

-1 was truly interested when saw it was a cult and would love to see an actual cult faction done correctly however this is not it plus its incredibly hard to take it serious with this current story/ideas/etc

 

I can see your concern with the lack of evidence for it being a cult-based organization, though we didn't want to explicitly state the particulars due to the nature of the rituals taking place within the mid-higher ranks as it was to be more secretive than up front with how the cult worships. I appreciate the input  

Edit: To further elaborate, we do intend to do ritualistic human sacrifices in place of traditional PKs. On top of that , we simply wanted to operate similar to a cult, by leaving out the particulars and promising results you can see. With this being said, the chefs special needs meat in it to be a proper stew 

Edited 18 hours ago by Togna Bologna

[String]

-1 cult is L, GGS buddy 

[Lunar]

-1

cult sounds so gross

[HydesDad]

-1. I've seen your rp, but I haven't seen any of the other members. What I have seen did not impress. Seems like just another minge faction.

[calink]

6 hours ago, Togna Bologna said:

Never watched it, thanks for the constructive criticism though. 

You have your unique roleplay listed as 'murder for hire' and your character is called Togna Bologna

Constructive criticism didn't feel warranted, lmao

[Geo_Zeus]

I appreciate the effort that was put into this, but this app reeks of gimmick diversity. The word "Cult" is only in the title, when the argument gets brought up you basically reply with "I didn't wanna state anything particular you have to accept this app and see" which is not how this works. The "Unique RP Examples" have been done to an extent by the majority of factions currently active. The only "new" idea that's not currently done is the Soup kitchen but that is directly antithetical to you guys being a FUCKING CULT.

Also who the fuck is gonna hire a different faction to clean up their mess? Why would anyone trust you with that?

-1

[Togna Bologna]

6 hours ago, Geo_Zeus said:

I appreciate the effort that was put into this, but this app reeks of gimmick diversity. The word "Cult" is only in the title, when the argument gets brought up you basically reply with "I didn't wanna state anything particular you have to accept this app and see" which is not how this works. The "Unique RP Examples" have been done to an extent by the majority of factions currently active. The only "new" idea that's not currently done is the Soup kitchen but that is directly antithetical to you guys being a FUCKING CULT.

Also who the fuck is gonna hire a different faction to clean up their mess? Why would anyone trust you with that?

-1

I see where youyr concern is with tasking others with a cleanup of that nature, though i'vve personally had other factions do hits for me as well as celanup. There is market out there, you just havent touched it. I am grateful for your input on the matter though and appreciate your input. I would like to bring a deesirable experience to the city by adding more dynamics to rp between factions  

Youre absolutely right on Uniqu rp though the examples I did  give, if they DO exist in the server today, arent being utilized. All we see around town is minges or dudes on park benches. The retainer itself hasnt been done in the server as a COD method for obtaining items FOR the company rather than have them stand around 20 minutes, hire the guy, then say "hey bring us back X amount of $ by this date or else" leaving newer players with ALL of the new information they've gained just to try and execute everything on thier own. Im not by any means saying lets hold thier hands, but it includes them more directly in tasks   Not to mention the proposed "slow-burn" rp where as many places you see or know about have new members who get transferred from other companies, or are old returning players who gaiin membership with no RP or anything like that but are still blessed with management. We aim to combat this by having every single initiate go through the same processes and procedures in order to gauge the initiates skills in order to place them in the correct department. 

 

10 hours ago, calink said:

You have your unique roleplay listed as 'murder for hire' and your character is called Togna Bologna

Constructive criticism didn't feel warranted, lmao

Was this not a MafiaRP server/ forum? Where does murder for hire exit the criteria for RP?

And Togna Balogna was the very first char I made when coming to the city, lots of RP w the guy  Sorry you just haven't seen em around. 

 

11 hours ago, HydesDad said:

-1. I've seen your rp, but I haven't seen any of the other members. What I have seen did not impress. Seems like just another minge faction.

The lack of effort on behalf of my team appears to be a bottleneck in itself. I can see where your concern is prominent on activity /  RP quality; though its hard to say "trust me bro" when there have only been a handful of actual events (with our last night boxing match being a flop ngl we needed better execution) I really do appreciate the input though  

 

13 hours ago, Lunar said:

-1

cult sounds so gross

Thank you for your input  We will keep trying to bring a desirable Cult experience to the players 

 

13 hours ago, String said:

-1 cult is L, GGS buddy 

GGs, you miss 100% of the shots you don't take!

Any constructive criticism for us to consider for future endeavors?

 

15 hours ago, Medinator said:

so its a cult but nothing in the story has anything cult related whatsoever nor is it tied to the story in any way (god the amount of possibilities in your story of how you couldve pushed it is such a big miss)

togna balogna the name of the leader both application and story... which i shouldnt have to explain why this isnt the best look

nothing cult related in the unique RP ideas/events when theres so many things you could do 

 

-1 was truly interested when saw it was a cult and would love to see an actual cult faction done correctly, its incredibly hard to take it serious with this current story/ideas/etc

there is potential though maybe with more time down the line

Also relating to the faction backstory-

The faction backstory is based off of actual events that happened. You can really check the stats and Togna Balogna DOES in fact have a felony and 15 years served for posession and intent to distribute. He did in fact operate behind the old Weiss tireshop, server map changhe happened, now we have ghetto. Its an original story thats ACTUALLY ties to Southside rather than just a "trust me bro" source on some story about an Indian drug lord. These events really happened and actually shape the organization rather then just filler words to hit the 250+ word count  This wasnt just a throw together story mentioning known places in the city.

[ASkull]

-1  

[V1KING]

You know what putting aside what everyone said I can see your vision. Although I agree with what everyone has said I hope the best for you. I think with some rework and more time you can make it work. 

+1

[Togna Bologna]

6 minutes ago, V1KING said:

You know what putting aside what everyone said I can see your vision. Although I agree with what everyone has said I hope the best for you. I think with some rework and more time you can make it work. 

+1

I am grateful for the positive feedback

I do see the general consensus being concerned with the backstory not incorporating more cult like elements. The original plan was to include general ideas around human sacrifice as well cannibalism though we wanted to have it more hidden on top of a concern of UA not approving the whole idea of cutting up a murdered person and feeding it through the soup kitchen. Rather than telling people we were gonna do that, we figured we would just simply do it. We will absolutely be reevaluating the team as well as the approach for the idea. OPur main concern was wanting to do something original to the server, granted many other organizations have already been done. We have had cartels rise and fall, we have had the mentioned polish, we have jhad Irish, Muslims, etc. We already have Jews, Americans, LOADS of Italians, as well as a rising Spanish and British clan (all the best of luck and wishes to them <3) so we were attempting to do a new approach than recommend something we have already seen done. My main take from this application would be to include more actual details about the cult activity to happen rather than keep it behind closed doors. 

Again, thank you for the positive feedback  

[Togna Bologna]

4 hours ago, ASkull said:

-1  

Thank you for sharing. Would you like to share your biggest concern?

[handsome]

+1 amazing askull is a retard

[Togna Bologna]

8 minutes ago, handsome said:

+1 amazing askull is a retard

I appreciate your support  

Thank you for sharing. I am unfamiliar w him myself so I dont know how much of a dumb stupidy head he could be

Edited 3 hours ago by Togna Bologna