The Toretti Crew Aka The Toretti Crime Family.

[Vincent Morelli]

Name of Faction: The Toretti Crime Family

Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 5

Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Family 

Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): Sicillian

Name of Character running the faction: Vincent Morelli

Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): ayoo121

Your SteamID: STEAM_0:0:153480478

Your Server playtime: been here since 2024 but i have 6 days of play time because i used to be a shit tier low quality minge.

Do you acknowledge and agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page? (Yes/No): Yes

Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned by us? (Yes/No): Yes

Provide an example of the unique Roleplay your faction will bring to the server/what type of roleplay we can expect from your faction (Images/Videos Preferred): I know their are way too many italian factions, but i wanna bring a old school mafia rp vibe to this server and bring something fresh in because alot of these factions have been here a minute and i think it wouldn't hurt to bring in a new family, i dont have any clips for you guys as i gotta set medal up again because i havent been on here since 2024 so i'm sorry for the lack of shit to show for, i will be updating this thread daily with clips and screenshots, so expect more coming from this post.

Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WVUNWfAOrPLgnO1m2uCz_NxZE6Tik7hNMFlBf7JdgVQ/edit?usp=sharing

 

I know their are way too many italian factions, but i wanna bring a old school mafia rp vibe to this server and bring something fresh in because alot of these factions have been here a minute and i think it wouldn't hurt to bring in a new family.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WVUNWfAOrPLgnO1m2uCz_NxZE6Tik7hNMFlBf7JdgVQ/edit?usp=sharing

[Bullets]

+1 The application looks pretty cool, its decent.  The applicant is a chill dude I don't see a problem with this besides the bans

[Sauerkraut]

+1

It's a unique application and I see this faction becoming a good one

[adam]

dominic toretti

[SolidSnakeDrive]

-1 for unfortunately the same reason you stated. Too many Italians. If it wasn't the case, it would've been a +1.

[calink]

-1 Italian faction, and generic

If you want to redevelop Italian roleplay then do that within an existing faction that needs it - imo

Also - 6 days of play time, 15 bans, is pretty nuts figures, haha.

[joeeey1]

The document is actually really unique, other than minor errors with punctuation and grammar.

6 days of play time is no where near the amount the leader of a faction should have. Along with 15 whole bans, kind of crazy. Not faction leader material in my opinion. 

I’d be interested in actually seeing you guys in game. 

The section where you are asked to provide examples and ideas for unique RP literally doesn’t contain a single example. Missed opportunity. 

-1

[ix_crazy_xi]

fast and furious

[Yoon]

-1 

You should not be running a faction you got pked on your first day because you processed drugs at construction and decided to try and fight the cops

[Hammer]

-1 Purely for the name Massimo coming up 29 times.

Nah tbh we got way too many Italian factions, playtime is a little low for a faction leader and a hell of a lot of bans.

If I see you guys in game doing some good RP I'd be open to changing to a +1.

[Matador1812]

Massive -1. 

I VC'd with him all last night and what I gathered was: 

Completely inexperienced

Knows hardly anybody and the people he does know don't like him

Has no real members

Thinks that he can start wars off rip and win because he's built different

Refuses to listen to any advice Yoon or I gave him

Got himself and his 2nd PK'd within an hour of being a sub-faction because he wanted to process in construction and fight the cops

All in all I sympathize with being the under dog but my Lord does he think a lot of himself

 

[GlamourPunk]

another italian faction…. original

 

-1

[Fox]

-1

 

PRO

- I like the application style, in that it is supposed to be a sort of FBI terminal. I however think you could've pushed it a bit further and made it look even more like a terminal.

- I liked the backstory at times.

 

 

CON

- Struggled to read this story at times. In one paragraph you use 'Giovanni’s men' 4 times.

- There is way too many names in here, you lose track very easy.

- If this is supposed to be an FBI terminal, why does it read like a story book? pick one format.

- You said it yourself. There are already a bunch of Italian families. You claim you want to do things differently, but give NO examples whatsoever.

- You havent played since '24 and have just got back on. It's very unlikely you have actually played much since then. So the idea of 'I want to do something different than the other italian families, is kind of null because you haven't even had a chance to see what they're doing.

- 6 days of playtime in 2 years isn't enough to run a faction, especially an Italian one.

- The way your paragraph's are laid out, made it feel like a wall of text.

Edited 4 minutes ago by Fox