The Wright Family Application

[V1KING]

1 hour ago, Homeslicey said:

Provide an example of the unique Roleplay your faction will bring to the server/what type of roleplay we can expect from your faction (Images/Videos Preferred):

We aim to be a higher class of faction. Bringing elegance and luxury to the city, tying in with our British heritage. As our main business, we would run a gentleman’s club/lounge. This would be considered a higher class establishment, where a strict dress code would be enforced to uphold our classy appearance. Once established, regular members will have the opportunity to purchase a VIP membership to the club where once a member, they will have the opportunity to enter into exclusive giveaways, enter private auctions for exclusive items, eat and drink for free for life, attend private parties, participate in a gentleman's boxing league and much more. We intend to be more business focused, rather than on bloodshed. We aim to have a well established private society, with an illegal racket running in the background. For our members, we aim to offer a unique and refreshing roleplay experience. Don’t expect the typical stand in front of the door guard that everyone is tired of. We will offer immersive tasks and roleplay for our members to keep them engaged, even from the lowest rank. 

Yet you want to run a gentleman's club...

Can you explain what caused all this?? I think I’m a little confused

Edited 20 hours ago by V1KING

[Tecunuman]

remember to put in y'alls app you fellas dont got 2.1k

 

[V1KING]

From my understanding the bill was paid I'm having problem understanding why my application has to become a battle ground for arguing. This seems like it's an IC problem. I can understand that you didn't like the RP and came here to post your opinion. But simply shit talking is not necessary. Please feel free to reach out on discord if you want to further solve this issue. 

[Trak]

14 minutes ago, V1KING said:

From my understanding the bill was paid I'm having problem understanding why my application has to become a battle ground for arguing. This seems like it's an IC problem. I can understand that you didn't like the RP and came here to post your opinion. But simply shit talking is not necessary. Please feel free to reach out on discord if you want to further solve this issue. 

No, the bill was argued and excuses were made to try not to pay. The rp was "thats a lot of money" and "the noodles made me ill". Yall came in with 7 people and cry about paying 2k? and thats your rp? Thats how you're gonna make relations with people? You're wasting and disrespecting peoples times and employees. If thats how yall wanna be before you are even a faction and ruin relations. 

Most people dont walk into a restaurant with 7 people and pay less than 30k, It's the low quality rp to get out of paying 2k. Its starting bad relations over nothing money. It aint a good start for a not even a faction. So thats the issue, Our convo can say here cause I think people deserve to know the full story. (I aint taking shit to discord)

[V1KING]

27 minutes ago, Trak said:

No, the bill was argued and excuses were made to try not to pay. The rp was "thats a lot of money" and "the noodles made me ill". Yall came in with 7 people and cry about paying 2k? and thats your rp? Thats how you're gonna make relations with people? You're wasting and disrespecting peoples times and employees. If thats how yall wanna be before you are even a faction and ruin relations. 

Most people dont walk into a restaurant with 7 people and pay less than 30k, It's the low quality rp to get out of paying 2k. Its starting bad relations over nothing money. It aint a good start for a not even a faction. So thats the issue, Our convo can say here cause I think people deserve to know the full story. (I aint taking shit to discord)

I understand you're upset but correct If I'm wrong you're making all these claims off of one interaction tonight? I'm also curious to know what the order could have possibly been to be 2k not that it's really any of my concerns. From my understandings we've made great RP with almost everyone we've interacted with. I apologize for our "bad RP" to happen with you guys. I'd also like to add that you're faction is the only faction we have "bad" relations with and if for some reason we have "bad" relations with others I'm very curious to know. We've had a "bad" interaction with one other faction and to be completely honest it was fun RP because we had a disagreement that we handled IC. I apologize that one IC interaction upset you enough to swarm my application with -1's. I will no longer be responding to messages regarding this matter thank you for your feedback I will gladly take it into account and use it going forward. 

[Saudi]

+1 leeds united 

[Shadow]

On 1/1/2026 at 11:22 PM, Fox said:

As someone who ran pretty much the only successful British faction for a number of years, i'll give you my input.
 

+1 - I think the app is pretty decent, and I wish you guys all the best.

PRO

- Diverse, it's great to see someone else attempt a British faction.

- Play time seems alright.

- I liked the backstory to a degree, although it does have some issues. 

 

CON 

- The breaks in the backstory are frustrating and some of them don't really add anything to the story. IMO you'd benefit from bigger time gaps, to add more text to your paragraphs. 

- I don't think you give enough examples of how you intend to be different from other factions. The VIP club thing is actually something we used to do weirdly lol. I'd like to hear more about your proposed business ideas, if you're steering clear of violence for a more business approach, how? you mention you want to steer clear away from standing around RP but by owning a club, you're going to end up with standing around RP.

 

Considerations

- Take it from me, you should decide early on if you're going to try and get people to talk in an english accent, or just the main guys etc. In TDS, I benefited greatly from the high command being actually British (for the most part) because trying to do this down the lines flops extremely hard.

- You mentioned a gentlemen's club, don't put poles in it for the love of God - learn from my mistake lmfao.

- Fuck Billy Kimber, here's what happened to the last Kimber. https://streamable.com/fu3qcz

Bro said he was successful smh, anywho +1 i havnt had the chance to interact with yall yet but the server needs some strong diversity.

[Fox]

25 minutes ago, Shadow said:

Bro said he was successful smh, anywho +1 i havnt had the chance to interact with yall yet but the server needs some strong diversity.

Faction was added before you even played the server. Ran for two years, in that time we owned 3 store fronts (pre map change), the club and the motel. 

Lil bro has no idea what he's talking about lmaoo

[Zqrxz]

+1 

Solid faction idea with good people running it