Thomas

I think you need to edit your backstory a little bit. Kind of an eye sore. Shrink your text and add some format to it. This is not an English class but I think a better back story really shows and only benefits you. Spice up the application itself to make it look nicer.

Taxation is not fun as an independent faction I hope you will be able to come up with millions because that's how much you will be taxed. To prevent this there would have to be new rules in place. I don't know what rock you have been living under but your faction would never be able to survive without some sort of protection from either the commission or Olympus. Hence why there is not a single faction in the server not under one of them. Protection of your faction is one of the most important things in the server. It makes the difference of surviving for a few weeks to a few months. Saying that mugging chars is against the rules yet making a suggestion that gears towards the people who mug is kind of funny. Clearly, you understand that not everything will be seen by staff, and trying to figure out mugging chars is a pain in the ass. The amount of work to make this a reality is so far from beneficial. If you want to create gangs/factions make a discord and make a faction application. Otherwise, go to DarkRP and make a gang there.

Hello, I was the admin who PKed you. So first you claim you did not mean to run them over. However, in my opinion, there is no doubt in my mind that you did not mean to hit them. You saw a group of 3 cops and decided I will run them over and nothing would happen. Speeding off and not stopping. In my eyes that gives cops a reason to justify killing you considering it was on purpose. You had ample time to change course to not hit them and I honestly believe that you tried to hit all of them but failed. You only attempted to turn your car about 10 feet after hitting one of the officers. I also got a second opinion on this PK to make sure it was the right call and the other staff member agreed with me. I think the argument you made after was "Why did you not warn me" and "I just come on here to OOC drive around" Not any real reason was stated besides the controls are finicky. No claiming you lagged or any other performance issue. Good luck with this appeal.

I do be hyping for this map for real. I can't wait to cause so much havoc in this new city. So many new spots to do PKs it's going to be good to see how each faction decides to RP on the new map seeing as everyone has there areas now.

+1 I think the server can benefit if we decide to add another civilian faction.

This application is far below the standard that is needed. Playtime is very low to run a faction. Also, your attitude towards others seems to me that you don't understand the gravity of your application. Unless you pull a miracle out of your ass and somehow make this application look 10x better, and convince us that you are capable of running a faction. Then you might have a shot with UA but I find that very unlikely. -1

I really like this idea and I do hope it gets looked at and considered again. Right now everything is free rain when it comes to guns. If you allow other factions to have attachments for a racket, it would create another avenue for money to go through. As for the license, I don't see why we would have to change anything. There are very little amount of guns that have automatic features. You already have to pay extra for attachments when you pay for a license. Just regulate it more and make sure that the attachments are not being sold illegally. Have two factions be in charge of attachments and if they are inactive or whatnot remove them. I don't know the reason they were removed before. I am sure there was a good reason, but If we can bring them back then I think it would make owning a weapon a bit more complicated which is good in my opinion.

What I mean by this is It could add more RP. But you would be taxed out the ass by either group of factions. Even new factions need to be under something either commission or Olympus. I think it would be a good idea but like Canadian said he does have plans for all these types of things but the point is to be a part of something to be in the structure. That would either be in a faction or in the PD. There is a reason why those base jobs like taxi and delivery driver are not a good way to make money. They are not supposed to be the main goal for people who join the server. You also have to understand that if we start giving Citizens a way to get into rumour the amount of mugging abuse that would happen would be out of this world. Targeting as well would be very easy. I think the suggestion is good but there are flaws that would come into play punishing the players who want to main factions.

I mean I think that it would be more of a hassle than a fix. I think we need to put time and effort into other things that could work on the server.

Being Independent on the server is really hard. There is really not that much power that comes with being independent.

Nah there isn't gonna be a coup for a bit if ever.

+1 Know this guy from Military RP and around the server. He is a good guy and will be a good addition to the staff team.

-1 Get some more time on the server it takes a lot of in-game knowledge that's not fully in the rules to understand lots of situations so its important that you have a good amount of time and experience on the server.

I want to like this faction application but there it is just so much wrong. The backstory could be better in my opinion. I think you did try, but you can make it look better. No appeal makes me say "I think this could be a good faction in the server" I think if you touch this application up a bit give more than just "Group rides and bar hopping" Then I think you have a shot. Where it stands I don't think the effort you put into this application will give you any favors. Neutral

+1 Great guy he knows what he is doing. I think he has the mind and dedication to be staff. He will do great as staff and I cant wait to start working with him.