La Sombra Caleña

[Walter Wilhelm]

Name of Faction:La Sombra Caleña

Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 5 and more people waiting to be aproved

Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Criminal confederation or any synonims that fit it but this one describes it the best

Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): Colombian,hispanic,american,irish,african jamaican,african american,asian etc everybody could be acvcepted

Name of Character running the faction: Darío Montoya Valencia

Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): reddragoon3

Your SteamID:  76561199509203942

Your Server playtime: 5d 23h 23m

Do you acknowledge and agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page? (Yes/No): Yes

Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned by us? (Yes/No): Yes

Provide an example of the unique Roleplay your faction will bring to the server/what type of roleplay we can expect from your faction (Images/Videos Preferred):

Provide examples or event ideas to promote activity within your faction and keep people interested. (Reference your unique RP from the question above):

Answer for both of these questions have been written in this document.

answer for both questions:RP Ideas

Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images):https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oa0cdb_EonYB0_mpvTrX6D7nDK1k6hQx3QjQPlcXWcE/edit?tab=t.0 Backstory

[Adam]

we can't access the doc

[Bullets]

Niggas see 1 faction get accepted and start throwing ideas around like frisbees

[Walter Wilhelm]

a shit my bad

[Aiden]

hell naw 

 

[tj21003]

Hell nah -1

[Yoon]

-1 get way more playtime

[ThatBananaGuy23]

-1 Need more playtime

[Walter Wilhelm]

yo can i get more feedback if u see this

[Pyro]

Random saw an Italian faction get accepted and made this hunk of garbage. Sorry for the hate, but dude, really?

Get some more playtime.

Edited August 15, 2025 by Pyro

[Omerta]

Jesus

[Coconut]

Not even gonna write anything constructive.

-1

[Sauerkraut]

-1

What

[SolidSnakeDrive]

This kid is a minge, literally 13/14 years old, did char abuse by swapping chars when he picked up my gun from the ground and staff forced him to give it back or get PK’d. Once told me he is banned from all communities of GMOD. 
 

-1

Edited September 9, 2025 by SolidSnakeDrive

[Skyzer]

-1

LOW ASS PLAYTIME

[Cpt. Caboose]

No -1

[String]

+1 everyone hating 

[Fox]

-1

Not a bad application. I enjoyed part of the backstory but to me it seems that you didn't write the whole thing. 

 

PRO

- Different nationality

- Part of the backstory is really good, interesting and really touches on the history of the faction

 

CON

- In your backstory, your writing style entirely changes. The first half of it, is written with extremely good punctuation and descriptive element's. It's like a book. Then just before the images come in, this changes entirely with random capital letters, no punctuation and things just not making sense? i.e 'If U look Under The police arrived' 

This to me tells me that you've had someone else write the backstory (which is fine i guess), or you have taken it from elsewhere.

-  Your RP ideas are OK at a glance but it is extremely difficult to read, matching with the second part of the backstory.

- Your play time is too low. You should take more time to see what it actually takes be HC in a faction.

[chadvini]

this shit is barely coherent brosquito 

[Walter Wilhelm]

On 9/25/2025 at 4:17 AM, Fox said:

-1

Not a bad application. I enjoyed part of the backstory but to me it seems that you didn't write the whole thing. 

 

PRO

- Different nationality

- Part of the backstory is really good, interesting and really touches on the history of the faction

 

CON

- In your backstory, your writing style entirely changes. The first half of it, is written with extremely good punctuation and descriptive element's. It's like a book. Then just before the images come in, this changes entirely with random capital letters, no punctuation and things just not making sense? i.e 'If U look Under The police arrived' 

This to me tells me that you've had someone else write the backstory (which is fine i guess), or you have taken it from elsewhere.

-  Your RP ideas are OK at a glance but it is extremely difficult to read, matching with the second part of the backstory.

- Your play time is too low. You should take more time to see what it actually takes be HC in a faction.

thank you so much to actually look into it so the first half of the story it was trasnlated from spanish cs its my first langugage for the images i didnt have time i dont rememeber why and my punctuation is bad if i wrote it myself in english but in spanish its al ittle bit different and my playtime has increased so thanks for actually giving good feedback

[SolidSnakeDrive]

-negative ∞, bro is permabanned

[Canadian-bacon]

Bro is indeed permbanned

[Canadian-bacon]

Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.

We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted.

You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.