Fox
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Following the evidence that Pizzle provided, it's clear that you were intending to VDM people. You also have a previous warning for VDM as well as a warning for RDM on the same night that you received this ban. I highly suggest you read the rules before returning to the server.
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Here's the adrenaline shot in action https://streamable.com/lovbdt
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"I didn't know I couldn't kill for the words they were saying" You've left out quite a bit here. You were banned because in the sit you openly admitted to RDMing because people were calling you out via rumour. I said to you that rumour could be anybody... Italians could be pretending to be Asian etc. In regardt the situation that happened before you RDM'd multiple people, it doesn't matter - you should've called staff that you were RDM'd following a mugging. Just because you were RDM'd doesn't mean you can retaliate... It's called revenge RDM. It's not eye for an eye. We're here for a reason but you took it upon yourself to retaliate. Re-read the rules.
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+/- Not a bad application, however I think it does fall on the lackluster front as others have pointed out. I would maybe take this to the drawing board again and figure out what you can change to make it more original, as it currently stands to me, it reads as just another Italian faction which you actually agree with yourself and the 'new elements' you speak of don't really strike me as making the faction that much different from others that already exist in the server. PRO - Well written - Backstory was broken up nicely, I enjoyed the use of images and dates. CON - Not diverse enough IMO. We have 6 Italian factions at the moment, and I don't think what you have put in this app is enough to distinguish yourselves from the others. - I liked the backstory but I do feel like it could've been padded out more with more information and history of the faction to make it really stand out. - Lack of originality, as others have pointed out there isn't really anything new in this application.
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You don't need to keep multi-posting and offering no additional info. If you need to add more information, just edit your previous reply.
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Server used to have payphones, unsure why it was removed though but I'm sure there was a good reason. +1
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+1 Decent enough app. nice to not have to sit and read very obvious AI drivel. PRO - Diverse - Interesting back story - Clear description of intended RP and intended events - Good amount of play time CON - I hate the name, as others have stated though, I know ST was a real gang... it just sounds a bit like a superhero team lol. - Whilst the back story was interesting, I think more wording would've been good
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+1 - Active member of the server and due to nationality can cover a time period where the server may not be as staff populated - Never had a bad interaction with Hammer, Good roleplayer and always strives for good rule abiding RP out of others around him. I think he's make a great mod.
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Usually I'd do a pro and con list to help the applicant out with their app, but I don't really have a pro for this one CON: - Massively AI generated. Massive slap in the face to those who have spent hours building their applications. - You claim to be experienced in RP but you can't give a single example that isn't generated by AI. - Your play time is incredibly low. You won't have the experience on how to run a successful faction. Play more. - Italian-black is a weird combination for your ethnicity. - Application is a wall of text which is hard to read and not at all gripping. My suggestion to you would be to have this one closed, take what I and others are saying, build a better application and play the server more and build the application over time.
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I'd like to see this more than a radio station to be honest.
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When did you have your flags removed? / how are you going to ensure you won't do something like this again as IMO your appeal doesn't seem very sincere.
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I'm just curious about something, In your original post you say that you went to a meeting and was killed, were you immediately pk'd upon death? your comment 'Ghost killed me, and I was later PKed.' suggests that after you were shot, you weren't PK'd immediately?
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Your flag appeal has been reviewed and accepted. The blacklist will be lifted from your account shortly.
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I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt here, however - I'm going to make it very clear that if you abuse your pet flags again that they will be removed and not be returned. Whilst graffiti can be performed IC, there is a difference between doing it just to be a minge and doing it for RP reasons. Please remember this going forward.
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You say that you RP'd putting the tags down but I can't see any example of this in the logs?
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I'm going to accept this on the premise that you don't have any previous history of rule breaks. I will say though, having a character to minge on isn't going to do you any favours, whilst I understand your logic behind it and maybe your wording wasn't the best. Please be cautious in future. Your ban appeal has been reviewed and accepted. The ban will be lifted from your account shortly. If it was deemed an invalid ban, it will also be removed from your record.
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Your flag appeal has been reviewed and accepted. The blacklist will be lifted from your account shortly.
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Idle/active threat makes sense to me in a world run by gangsters. Whilst I understand your reasoning behind the safety part, IMO it would just invite a lot of RDM bating. The threat rule is fine as it is.
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Did some investigation and found this to be a standard dons order PK. Your appeal has been reviewed and denied. We have determined this PK to be reasonable and/or justified. You may not re-appeal this PK.
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Doesn't really make sense to be honest. Kind of ruins the idea of marketing. IMO the best way to do this would be to maybe RP it, create a business who follows the trading of items and make your own 'rare' lists from the information you gather.
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-1. Way too cluttered and unoriginal. I'll leave you some pointers but IMO you should scrap this application, spend some time working on it and actually play the server more so you have a better understanding of how factions work. PRO - Diversity is good - Although we have an MC already, another one couldn't hurt. CON - AI generated text. Not good at all, some people spend hours working on their back stories and using a tool to generate one is a bit of a slap in the face to those people, and will not play in your favour at all. - Wall of text, it makes me not want to read it at all, the parts I did read were boring. - Rest of the app that isn't part of the backstory is lackluster. You're asked to provide evidence of what you would do with your faction and you really don't give much to go off. "We are a Mc so we do not operate like most crime families", okay so what DO you do? give examples. - Your play time is way too low to know the ins and outs of how to run a faction, and I think it shows in your application.
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+1 Great app, really stands out above the rest PRO: - Well thought out backstory - Different nationality - Trying to stand out above the rest of the factions - Really enjoyed the way you laid out your backstory and made for a good read CON: - Only real con I have is that the rest of the application was a bit 'wall of texty' but kind of unavoidable if you're trying to demonstrate what you would do with your leadership. Wish you all the best on this one. GLGL
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Hi there, Pking admin here. I was provided a clip of yourself and another player meeting for a deal at the motel. He provides you the money for the goods (around 22k) and you advise him that they're in the trunk of the car. You both get into the car and he opens it up, before he could take anything from there, he is thrown out of the car and you quickly drove in reverse in an attempt to escape. He then shot the car, blowing it up and killing you in the process. You were then PK'd as a result of unsuccessfully scamming over 10k.