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+/- Not a bad application but felt it left a little bit to be desired, why two accounts though? Pros: - Ethnicity, would be great to have an Irish mob again. - Well written and easy to read. Cons: - Wall of text, the text itself is easy to read but felt like it could've been broken up better with sub headings. - Parts of the story kind of lack a little punch. Felt like you could've added a lot more into the activities, both legal and illegal of the faction. Right now it kind of just reads as 'we're from ireland, and we're a faction'. - I like some of the RP ideas but I think you need more to stand out as individual, so you don't fall into the same generic RP as other factions.

+/- Honestly, if people would actually RP it - it would maybe be fine... but I can honestly see this just becoming a faction for minges and throwaway characters.

Of course I know how rackets work... IMO the way you explained it made it seem like a general criminal racket, rather than being faction locked.

Agree with Canadian. It would be cool to have another crime racket but the logistics of this suggestion don't make sense to me. If every faction had access to it there would need to be specific coding to check whether the item changed hands before selling it to the NPC... Seems like a lot of work.

What kills me the most about this loser is that the '007 gang' was him and only him lmfaooooo

This was my thinking, in all honesty. Would be a huge QOL improvement

What lmfao You need to enunciate

-1 ... what? I can't even give you a pro or con list to help you make your application better, because there isn't an application to begin with. There is literally no backstory, or information.

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It's quite obvious that you cannot prop climb onto roofs... I'll give you another chance this time..I highly recommend you read the rules on props again. Breaking prop rules again will mean your flags will once again be taken

In agreement with the banning admin and I've denied the other appeal. Your appeal has been reviewed and denied. We have determined this PK to be reasonable and/or justified. You may not re-appeal this PK.

You didn't have the right equipment by the look of it. Instead of trying to pat him down for weapons, you could've just mugged him and searched him for weapons. Your /me kinda reads funny too. It's clear your intent as you state in the ticket 'me and an associate were mugging a guy'. Some could argue that by YOU patting him down for weapons, could be seen as powergaming, especially if you did not /roll for it, making the powergame argument irrelevant. Furthermore there is a plethora of rules and guides on game functions. Claiming ignorance of rules or game function is not a valid excuse, in the future come prepared or at least shoot the coked out guy with the knife. Your appeal has been reviewed and denied. We have determined this PK to be reasonable and/or justified. You may not re-appeal this PK.

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I've reviewed what both parties have posted. I'm going to give you another chance. Don't abuse your flags again otherwise they'll be removed once again.

What flavour was the cake though

So rather than just add to the negatives I thought I'd offer a bit of constructive criticism, because it's clear that this application is lacking. - Don't use AI generated text, or lazy writing People work incredibly hard to create their backstories and how their roleplay fits in with it, using AI to do this for you comes off as cheap and a bit of a slap in the face to those who have put the effort in to create something interesting. - Work on your story, and how you fit into it We know the story of the Medellin cartel. We know who Don Pablo is... how do YOU and your friends fit into the story, how did you land in New York? what drives you, what is different about you that stands out from every other faction that is in the server? - Define your niche What makes your faction good? why should I join your faction?. You need to create something that people are going to read and be like 'Oh shit, this is fire - i'll keep an eye out for these guys. Right now your backstory just reads as 'we iz colombian. Pablo lika da cocaine'. It needs to be more dynamic than that, what is your roleplay niche? - Play the server Finally, play the server some more. 90 hours of playtime is not enough to learn how to run a faction, it actually takes a pretty big responsibility and time commitment. 90 hours isn't enough to understand how it all works, play - rise up the ranks of another faction and learn. Hope this helps, Peace.

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Okay, I've reviewed the clips here and there's a few things that I've noted. There is no clear evidence at all that they 'threatened you with a gun', except for the part where he flashes it through the window... but the gun is on safety. This means that he isn't an active threat. This leads me to believe that the time BEFORE the clip, the gun was also on safety (although there is obviously no evidence of this). You also say to them that they can keep the money, then ask for it back, I get that you were trying to case the place. It's quite clear that you maybe need to learn the difference between an active and inactive threat. As you were banned literally yesterday for NLR and Minge behaviour, I'm going to deny this. Use this time to read the rules on killing.

Kind of on the fence with the suggestion I think it could either be annoying or good interactable RP. If it's implemented as just 'press e to fill up' then I think it'll just become annoying, if there could be RP involved, i.e oil factions could work as gas pump attendee's and had some sort of influence over the price of gas, then I think it would be interesting.

The bloods and crisps thing tend to be players on throwaway alt characters, rather than committing to making a faction app. I'd be happy to see more civilian 'criminal' activity but I don't think your suggestions are the way to go about it. When it comes down to the be all and end all it's Mafia RP. Making civs have their own demi faction would take away from the mafia element.

Cut and paste dons order as far as I'm concerned. Your appeal has been reviewed and denied. We have determined this PK to be reasonable and/or justified. You may not re-appeal this PK.

+1 on this. Good application and I enjoyed reading the backstory and proposed hierarchy.

Would be pretty good but I think for the most part it will destroy FPS. Full capped server + rain = lag city baby

That's actually a good suggestion IMO.

You'd expect the members of the faction to be able to pronounce the name of it though. It's a bit of a mouthful lmao.