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Name of Faction: The Wright Crime Family

Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 7

Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Crime Family

Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): English, (British)

Name of Character running the faction: Daniel Fernsby

Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): ___alex____#0638

Your SteamID: 76561198829389343

Your Server playtime: 3weeks 2days 7hours (559 hours)

Do you acknowledge and agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page? (Yes/No): Yes

Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned by us? (Yes/No): Yes

Provide an example of the unique Roleplay your faction will bring to the server/what type of roleplay we can expect from your faction (Images/Videos Preferred):

We aim to be a higher class of faction. Bringing elegance and luxury to the city, tying in with our British heritage. As our main business, we would run a gentleman’s club/lounge. This would be considered a higher class establishment, where a strict dress code would be enforced to uphold our classy appearance. Once established, regular members will have the opportunity to purchase a VIP membership to the club where once a member, they will have the opportunity to enter into exclusive giveaways, enter private auctions for exclusive items, eat and drink for free for life, attend private parties, participate in a gentleman's boxing league and much more. We intend to be more business focused, rather than on bloodshed. We aim to have a well established private society, with an illegal racket running in the background. For our members, we aim to offer a unique and refreshing roleplay experience. Don’t expect the typical stand in front of the door guard that everyone is tired of. We will offer immersive tasks and roleplay for our members to keep them engaged, even from the lowest rank. 
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Provide examples or event ideas to promote activity within your faction and keep people interested. (Reference your unique RP from the question above):
As stated above, we plan to hold private auctions for our "High Roller VIPS". The auctions would start at a much lower price than buying price so there will be a real incentive for people to participate. For faction members we aim to hold weekly "block parties" where faction members and guests can come to mingle. Appreciation and awards will be handed out to top performers of the week. We also want to give new people who come to the faction a more enjoyable time. No more sitting on a door for five years. We aim to have different positions for new members. For example errand runners, bodyguards, drivers, and bartending. One of our biggest goals is to keep new members interested instead of staring into the street senselessly. We plan to have open bar nights where drinks and food are free for anyone. To further iterate on our faction being heavily business based, we intend to build relations with other factions, but in the scenario that someone tries impeding on our business we wont hesitate to show face. 

Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LA-v8vhceDd7glelu3bKljk8_Z80g2Qk3ZwEkOK7mrs/edit?usp=sharing

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+1 Unique ideas. Never seen a faction of this nature. It would be interesting.

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+1 love the back story

ive interacted with these guys numerous times, solid rp and awesome group of guys 🙂

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More peaky blinder roleplayers who kill you for getting too close or for perceived 'disrespect" 

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3 hours ago, Mike Brown said:

More peaky blinder roleplayers who kill you for getting too close or for perceived 'disrespect" 

I could see why you'd think this and I could also see why you wouldn't believe me If I told you we surely won't be doing that. Our goal is to bring diversity and fun rp to the city. I'd be more than happy to give you more details if interested. I appreciate your feed back and will take into account of things not to do. 

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you can only use knives, melee weapons, and revolvers and the occasional hunting rifle

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+1 Great ideas the auctions and block parties would be good for RP

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+1 seems like great ideas. Ran into these guys a few times it was nothing but solid rp. 

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what football club does the wright family support?

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Wrong

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Seen their RP in the townhouse and they got class, seems very Diamond Syndicate to me. Not a bad thing, but not the most original. Better than having carbon copy Italian faction #14.

+1

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-1 DIAMOND ONLY BRITISH FACTION NEEDED BRING IT BACK

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-1 more un unique restaurant rp everyone and their mother has restaurant rp no unique ideas here.

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5 hours ago, Trak said:

-1 more un unique restaurant rp everyone and their mother has restaurant rp no unique ideas here.

I appreciate the feed back and I totally agree with restaurant rp. Our vision goes further than just your average bar, lounge or restaurant. If you'd like to get more info feel free to reach out. I hope to see you in the city and get some good rp going.  

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@Fox you must give your response to this.

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-1 shit back story 

 

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+1 These boys know what they’re doing, something different.

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+1 British -1 Lame App

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On 12/28/2025 at 9:44 PM, tj21003 said:

-1 shit back story 

 

I'm sorry to see that you aren't a fan of our backstory. Was there anything in particular? Please feel free to lmk my dms are always open or feel free to post it here. I appreciate your feed back and if there is anything I can do to help you out or make our backstory more enjoyable feel free to reach out. 

 

On 12/30/2025 at 8:18 AM, bigsmoke said:

+1 British -1 Lame App

I appreciate you posting and I'd like to know what bored you in our application. As always my dms are open feel free to reach out so I can further understand and possibly make the application more appealing. 

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As someone who ran pretty much the only successful British faction for a number of years, i'll give you my input.
 

+1 - I think the app is pretty decent, and I wish you guys all the best.

PRO

- Diverse, it's great to see someone else attempt a British faction.

- Play time seems alright.

- I liked the backstory to a degree, although it does have some issues. 

 

CON 

- The breaks in the backstory are frustrating and some of them don't really add anything to the story. IMO you'd benefit from bigger time gaps, to add more text to your paragraphs. 

- I don't think you give enough examples of how you intend to be different from other factions. The VIP club thing is actually something we used to do weirdly lol. I'd like to hear more about your proposed business ideas, if you're steering clear of violence for a more business approach, how? you mention you want to steer clear away from standing around RP but by owning a club, you're going to end up with standing around RP.

 

Considerations

- Take it from me, you should decide early on if you're going to try and get people to talk in an english accent, or just the main guys etc. In TDS, I benefited greatly from the high command being actually British (for the most part) because trying to do this down the lines flops extremely hard.

- You mentioned a gentlemen's club, don't put poles in it for the love of God - learn from my mistake lmfao.

- Fuck Billy Kimber, here's what happened to the last Kimber. https://streamable.com/fu3qcz

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