Pimp's Paradise

[Wojtek]

Name of Faction:  Pimps Paradise

Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 5

Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Street Gang

Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): American / African American

Name of Character running the faction: Gabriel "Silky Smooth" Gonzalez

Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): Its_Wojtek

Your SteamID: STEAM_0:1:444435754

Your Server playtime: 1mo 4d 15h 48m

Do you acknowledge and agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page? (Yes/No): Yes

Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned by us? (Yes/No): Yes

Provide an example of the unique Roleplay your faction will bring to the server/what type of roleplay we can expect from your faction (Images/Videos Preferred): Of course, as a faction full of pimps, our property is going to be made to look like a strip club/bar (For aesthetics only.) Encouraging roleplay from the bar. "Patched" equivalent members, those who have already earned their colors, will drive low riders through the streets, listening to music, doing drugs, living life to its fullest. We really want to emphasize on the stereotypical pimp lifestyle, nice suits, big coats, lowriders, gambling, drugs and who could forget jewelry? 

Not only would our Faction sling drugs and hold big guns, but fashion is what makes a pimp! Spending our hard earned dough on whatever jewelry and nice suits we can get our hands on. Holding an event coined "The Velvet Stroll" in which contestants get voted on for their outfits, and the winner wins a prize of clothing or stone cold cash.

For clarity purposes, we do not plan on doing any sexual roleplay, we simply like the style and RP of a pimp. 

Provide examples or event ideas to promote activity within your faction and keep people interested. (Reference your unique RP from the question above): As said above, we are going to have the Velvet Stroll event, as well as a colors ceremony, to add some good Rp to the ranking process, each influential rank up will come with an event in said person's name, alcohol, drugs, all the good things every Pimp looks forward to. 

Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): The year is 1967, an Afro-Mexican American man named Silky Ray Gonzalez and a couple of buddies were at their local jazz bar, a restitute for men of he and his brother's color. He never found himself selling dope with his buddies, making some money on the side whenever their jobs didn't pay them enough. Soon, they opened a business selling their roster out of a motel room, they were making more money than they ever had, selling drugs and selling time was more profitable than they could ever imagine, they quit their jobs and went crooked for good.

Things were going relatively well for the men, they began spreading their wings with the newfound income, spending money on suits that would draw attention from anyone, from dark purples to light pinks, leopard print to zebra print. They were rolling in it, and new members were appearing every week. They ran several underground gambling and escort rings, out of the very Jazz bars that they took refuge in.  By 1973, whenever Cocaine and Heroin made its way to New York. business was better than ever. They began buying out nightclubs and record labels, anything to get them more money. Greed got to Silky Ray, all of his lavish living style caught up to him, he got caught for Money Laundering in 1976, and later died in prison in 1978, murdered by another inmate.

That marked the end of Pimp's Paradise, jackets left behind, most of their businesses being sold off, the remaining members leaving with what money they could get out of it.

Now, Silky Ray's illegitimate son with one of the escorts, wants to recreate his father's empire, after years of his own experience. 

 

[JJ_]

and i thought supreme team was too nigger-ish

[Ties]

supreme team 2.0

[Bullets]

Is this satire?

[Justfire]

-/+ I’m neutral on this one due to low members your playtime is fine but I feel that certain factions like this one shouldn’t be one I mean we already have supreme team and you guys seem like a duplicate of them I would also like to add in that having a gun racket you would have to be trusted as a don to not abuse it as well as your other members and also a lot of factions already have gun rackets one more would be to much that’s all I will say but change my mind

[Wojtek]

22 minutes ago, Justfire said:

-/+ I’m neutral on this one due to low members your playtime is fine but I feel that certain factions like this one shouldn’t be one I mean we already have supreme team and you guys seem like a duplicate of them I would also like to add in that having a gun racket you would have to be trusted as a don to not abuse it as well as your other members and also a lot of factions already have gun rackets one more would be to much that’s all I will say but change my mind

Nah no gun racket, just an interest in collecting.

[Sauerkraut]

Idk how to -1 this 

Are you a subfaction of supreme team?

[lsxfern]

Ethnic Background: African American

Faction Leader: Gabriel Gonzalez

lol

 

[SunnyD]

+1 Why is everyone acting like you cant have 2 black factions.
Stay wopping 

[Bullets]

The name sounds like a fortnite POI

[Coconut]

Yeah, see, I want the server to get more roleplay, not less.

[calink]

Low qual app and also the last thing the server needs, imo

[Wizner]

Let’s make our faction about spending faction funds on clothing and guns sounds awesome top-notch rp 

[ASkull]

-1 too many niggers already 

[Justfire]

5 hours ago, Wojtek said:

Nah no gun racket, just an interest in collecting.

Okay but I’m still a neutral because it seems as you took one big look at supreme team had some people and made a faction are you really ready to dedicate hours to gather more people for property payments etc are you going to be active I’ve gotta say factions are big deals and this faction feels like a copy 

[Omerta]

Fuck no.

 

-1

[Faith]

lol

[Fox]

+/- 

I think people are being a bit unfair on this one. Seems like you have some good ideas but your actual application is a bit lackluster. I think if you could take away some of my points and update your application, you might be onto something, with some consideration.

 

 

PRO:

- The diverse angle of everyone being African-American is interesting.

- Your backstory and the core idea of everyone being 'pimps' is quite unique.

- I enjoyed some of your RP ideas.

 

CON

- I fucking hate the name Pimp's Paradise. There are so many better names

- The entire point of your faction revolves around clothing, this means you're going to need to have some serious custom items or at the very least, the funds to keep a constant stock of custom items for your guys. Why would I join 'Pimp's Paradise' over another faction if you're going to make me wear clothes from the clothing store, if you get me.

- Because your application is a wall of text, it's hard to decipher. Even by making each required category bold would help.

 

Consideration:

- From personal experience, owning a strip club in Diverge is going to get you labeled as a gay bar almost immediately.

- This does read a little like a Supreme clone. You need to make it very obvious that you are two different factions, but in the same breath we have a ton of Italian factions that are quite similar so it couldn't hurt to have two blacks.