Dr. Hax Posted March 23 Share Posted March 23 (edited) This application thread can be closed. Will be back with better ideas. Edited Wednesday at 03:40 PM by Dr. Hax 1 Link to comment
Jmoorsey Posted March 23 Share Posted March 23 -1 Lazy AI generated backstory that doesnt even meet the faction application requirements. Low playtime, and too many Italian factions in Diverge as is. 1 Link to comment
anzati1 Posted March 23 Share Posted March 23 (edited) low playtime for the server and extremely short backstory. i highly recommend looking at the other faction's accepted applications to figure out your footing on some "read between the lines" expectations. oh also.... for a faction i think its common sense to not AI generate it 100% Edited March 23 by anzati1 1 Link to comment
Bullets Posted March 23 Share Posted March 23 (edited) -1 low effort and close to no playtime Adding onto the -1, this guy has 0 clue how the server and its mechanics work I highly doubt he could run a faction for longer than a week. Edited Friday at 01:57 AM by Bullets 1 Link to comment
Crack Posted March 23 Share Posted March 23 +1000 This backstory was really well done 1 Link to comment
xDutchCat Posted March 23 Share Posted March 23 Another Italian faction? What does your faction has to offer what all the other Italians aren't doing? 1d server playtime and a well written AI story is a -1 for me 1 Link to comment
Omerta Posted March 23 Share Posted March 23 While I’ve been accused of writing with AI when I haven’t, this very obviously isn’t just well written English. Super obviously generic and flavorless AI and offerings that are completely run-of-the-mill compared to what’s already on offer in the city. Your playtime certainly reflects what you think this city needs. How about actually roleplay here and see what the city has to offer before trying to inject yourself as a broke ass Don? Link to comment
Cannon Posted March 23 Share Posted March 23 -1 Very low play time and AI generated backstory Link to comment
Trak Posted March 23 Share Posted March 23 -1 does not bring anything creative to the server. Way too many italian factions as is that all just do the same thing as eachother. If there was a twist to their RP might be a different vote but as is, there is not Link to comment
Dick Grayson Posted March 23 Share Posted March 23 -1 we do not need another wop faction Link to comment
Bullets Posted March 24 Share Posted March 24 6 hours ago, Dick Grayson said: we do not need another wop faction Drooler 1 Link to comment
Fox Posted March 24 Share Posted March 24 -1 Usually I would write a PRO/CON list for applications but there actually isn't anything redeeming in this application. - You used AI to write the entire application. This is a bit of a slap in the face to those who spend a great deal of time on their applications. - You claim to know the ins and outs of RP but you didn't provide a single original RP idea. - There are a bunch of Italian factions already, if you were looking to write up an Italian faction you need to make it stand out somehow, you don't do this here. - Your play time is very low, you need to play more to find out the ins and outs of what it takes to run a faction. I'd suggest reading this guide I wrote in November and work on a new application whilst you are actively playing and making amendments along the way. Link to comment
Dr. Hax Posted Tuesday at 08:03 PM Author Share Posted Tuesday at 08:03 PM Appreciate the feedback. Link to comment
JJ_ Posted Wednesday at 03:37 AM Share Posted Wednesday at 03:37 AM On 3/23/2025 at 2:27 AM, Dr. Hax said: Name of Character running the faction: Vincent Camorra Hell yeah 2 Link to comment
Dr. Hax Posted Wednesday at 03:38 PM Author Share Posted Wednesday at 03:38 PM 11 hours ago, JJ_ said: Hell yeah Breakfast of champions. Waffles and hamburgers with coke. Link to comment
Jmoorsey Posted Friday at 07:20 PM Share Posted Friday at 07:20 PM On 3/23/2025 at 11:06 PM, TayP said: Is this a furry crime family? smh You've obviously never been a Gambino... Link to comment
TayP Posted Saturday at 12:36 AM Share Posted Saturday at 12:36 AM On 3/23/2025 at 1:27 AM, Dr. Hax said: This application thread can be closed. Will be back with better ideas. bro got bullied out of making a faction Link to comment
Dr. Hax Posted 5 hours ago Author Share Posted 5 hours ago yall can suck this D buncha geeks 2 Link to comment
Omerta Posted 3 hours ago Share Posted 3 hours ago 1 hour ago, Dr. Hax said: yall can suck this D buncha geeks Ok, Don Lupo. Link to comment
Canadian-bacon Posted 2 hours ago Share Posted 2 hours ago Thank you for applying for a faction. Unfortunately your application has been denied. We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted. You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted. Link to comment
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