Dr. Hax Posted March 23, 2025 Posted March 23, 2025 (edited) This application thread can be closed. Will be back with better ideas. Edited March 26, 2025 by Dr. Hax 1
anzati1 Posted March 23, 2025 Posted March 23, 2025 (edited) low playtime for the server and extremely short backstory. i highly recommend looking at the other faction's accepted applications to figure out your footing on some "read between the lines" expectations. oh also.... for a faction i think its common sense to not AI generate it 100% Edited March 23, 2025 by anzati1 3
Bullets Posted March 23, 2025 Posted March 23, 2025 (edited) -1 low effort and close to no playtime Adding onto the -1, this guy has 0 clue how the server and its mechanics work I highly doubt he could run a faction for longer than a week. Edited March 28, 2025 by Bullets 1
xDutchCat Posted March 23, 2025 Posted March 23, 2025 Another Italian faction? What does your faction has to offer what all the other Italians aren't doing? 1d server playtime and a well written AI story is a -1 for me 1
Omerta Posted March 23, 2025 Posted March 23, 2025 While I’ve been accused of writing with AI when I haven’t, this very obviously isn’t just well written English. Super obviously generic and flavorless AI and offerings that are completely run-of-the-mill compared to what’s already on offer in the city. Your playtime certainly reflects what you think this city needs. How about actually roleplay here and see what the city has to offer before trying to inject yourself as a broke ass Don? 1
Sauerkraut Posted March 23, 2025 Posted March 23, 2025 -1 Very low play time and AI generated backstory 1
Trak Posted March 23, 2025 Posted March 23, 2025 -1 does not bring anything creative to the server. Way too many italian factions as is that all just do the same thing as eachother. If there was a twist to their RP might be a different vote but as is, there is not
Bullets Posted March 24, 2025 Posted March 24, 2025 6 hours ago, Dick Grayson said: we do not need another wop faction Drooler 1
Fox Posted March 24, 2025 Posted March 24, 2025 -1 Usually I would write a PRO/CON list for applications but there actually isn't anything redeeming in this application. - You used AI to write the entire application. This is a bit of a slap in the face to those who spend a great deal of time on their applications. - You claim to know the ins and outs of RP but you didn't provide a single original RP idea. - There are a bunch of Italian factions already, if you were looking to write up an Italian faction you need to make it stand out somehow, you don't do this here. - Your play time is very low, you need to play more to find out the ins and outs of what it takes to run a faction. I'd suggest reading this guide I wrote in November and work on a new application whilst you are actively playing and making amendments along the way.
JJ_ Posted March 26, 2025 Posted March 26, 2025 On 3/23/2025 at 2:27 AM, Dr. Hax said: Name of Character running the faction: Vincent Camorra Hell yeah 2
Dr. Hax Posted March 26, 2025 Author Posted March 26, 2025 11 hours ago, JJ_ said: Hell yeah Breakfast of champions. Waffles and hamburgers with coke.
TayP Posted March 29, 2025 Posted March 29, 2025 On 3/23/2025 at 1:27 AM, Dr. Hax said: This application thread can be closed. Will be back with better ideas. bro got bullied out of making a faction
Omerta Posted March 31, 2025 Posted March 31, 2025 1 hour ago, Dr. Hax said: yall can suck this D buncha geeks Ok, Don Lupo. 1 1
Canadian-bacon Posted March 31, 2025 Posted March 31, 2025 Thank you for applying for a faction. Unfortunately your application has been denied. We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted. You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted. 1
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