PabloCAstro Posted August 20, 2024 Posted August 20, 2024 they have great variety of delicuose sea food +1 1
Shamrock Posted August 20, 2024 Posted August 20, 2024 Neutral I was going to support this app, but after reading some of the reviews and since i just got back on the server after a long hiatus, I'm going to have to stay neutral. They asked me to leave a review for their restaurant, so im just keeping good on my word that i would. I dont know enough about these guys and their past, but i was just down at the docks with them and theyre at least trying to rp. I'm all for bringing rp to the server, but honestly i think their are enough Italian factions atm. Havent really been on the server enough recently to say much more. Sorry.
xDutchCat Posted August 20, 2024 Posted August 20, 2024 (edited) -1 I'd think its better to gain more Experience first, I don't really believe you're ready to face being a don of a faction. 3 weeks is just not enough playtime imo Edited August 20, 2024 by xDutchCat 2
RealMF Posted August 20, 2024 Posted August 20, 2024 I feel like the arguement of not enough playtime is unfair, if you check most of the recently Accepted Factions, the vast majority of the Don's of those factions had 3 weeks of playtime or even below that, with the exception of 1 or 2. Also from what it looks like this guy has been around since 2022 so he probably has the necessary experience.
okyes Posted August 20, 2024 Posted August 20, 2024 -1 mid app, idea is meh, dont see it going anywhere also asked me to post my opinion via dm's so thats already a -1 2
MxR Posted August 21, 2024 Posted August 21, 2024 5 hours ago, RealMF said: I feel like the arguement of not enough playtime is unfair, if you check most of the recently Accepted Factions, the vast majority of the Don's of those factions had 3 weeks of playtime or even below that, with the exception of 1 or 2. Also from what it looks like this guy has been around since 2022 so he probably has the necessary experience. just because the forum join date is 2022, doesnt mean hes been playing that long. He obviously quit and joined and fulltimed it later on. 3 weeks simply isnt enough.
Udek Posted August 21, 2024 Posted August 21, 2024 -1 Just cause you can doesn't mean you should, it's a unoriginal idea with a lackluster application; hell you couldn't even pick a original business name. 1 1 1
Fox Posted August 22, 2024 Posted August 22, 2024 (edited) +/- Not a bad application, however I think it does fall on the lackluster front as others have pointed out. I would maybe take this to the drawing board again and figure out what you can change to make it more original, as it currently stands to me, it reads as just another Italian faction which you actually agree with yourself and the 'new elements' you speak of don't really strike me as making the faction that much different from others that already exist in the server. Quote We wish to be sort of in the same area as a typical Crime Family with Italian RP, but with the introduction of new elements. PRO - Well written - Backstory was broken up nicely, I enjoyed the use of images and dates. CON - Not diverse enough IMO. We have 6 Italian factions at the moment, and I don't think what you have put in this app is enough to distinguish yourselves from the others. - I liked the backstory but I do feel like it could've been padded out more with more information and history of the faction to make it really stand out. - Lack of originality, as others have pointed out there isn't really anything new in this application. Edited August 22, 2024 by Fox 3
chadvini Posted August 22, 2024 Author Posted August 22, 2024 2 hours ago, Fox said: +/- Not a bad application, however I think it does fall on the lackluster front as others have pointed out. I would maybe take this to the drawing board again and figure out what you can change to make it more original, as it currently stands to me, it reads as just another Italian faction which you actually agree with yourself and the 'new elements' you speak of don't really strike me as making the faction that much different from others that already exist in the server. PRO - Well written - Backstory was broken up nicely, I enjoyed the use of images and dates. CON - Not diverse enough IMO. We have 6 Italian factions at the moment, and I don't think what you have put in this app is enough to distinguish yourselves from the others. - I liked the backstory but I do feel like it could've been padded out more with more information and history of the faction to make it really stand out. - Lack of originality, as others have pointed out there isn't really anything new in this application. Thank you for the input. The ethnic thing I totally understand, this is just a faction where you get to be Italian but you don't have to be shittin bricks up to tha don foreva. The events are going to be many, we will have as many as we can to participate, and the events will be a lot more action packed, like having the members steal, go on bounty missions if its possible, organize a massive strike, and also the more mundane stuff such as cool events involving the restaurant and future talent shows.
Noar Posted August 23, 2024 Posted August 23, 2024 -1 doesn’t seem like it’ll be lead well, not saying you’re a good leader but with 3w on the server that’s a lot of time but I think there are better faction applications than this by far. 1 2
Ramone Cassano Posted August 23, 2024 Posted August 23, 2024 Decent restaurant, the atmosphere/decor/overall build quality could be improved on... Seem like some decent RPers, but some stories in the replies tell different tales. IDK man, i'm really neutral on it. I think you guys gotta work on your image and you'll be golden.
Medinator Posted August 31, 2024 Posted August 31, 2024 (edited) Applying on civic was the worse move, idc the server politics its just how can you provide to your family and upkeep it when you're applying on other servers and would need to uphold the same responsibilities on both ends Edited August 31, 2024 by Medinator 1
Da Boyz Posted September 6, 2024 Posted September 6, 2024 On 8/31/2024 at 4:13 PM, Jmoorsey said: Close thread. They are switching to Civic Networks Civics is not even out yet what are you yapping about 1
Thomas Posted November 12, 2024 Posted November 12, 2024 -1 Just makes no sense whatsoever, and they plan to play on another community.
Canadian-bacon Posted November 30, 2024 Posted November 30, 2024 Currently perma banned Thank you for applying for a faction. Unfortunately your application has been denied. We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted. You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.
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