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I appreciate it brother we try to give the best RP possible. We're waiting patiently!

+1 3 days is low but the application is very well put together why put time into an app if you're not serious about it. Best of luck my friend

+1 Would actually be a good addition

I think it could be good if executed right +1

I could be wrong but I think its only when in 3rd person?? I know exactly what you're talking about. Could be wrong but I agree it should be fixed but I doubt it will just because it's been like that for as long as I can remember.

I understand you're upset but correct If I'm wrong you're making all these claims off of one interaction tonight? I'm also curious to know what the order could have possibly been to be 2k not that it's really any of my concerns. From my understandings we've made great RP with almost everyone we've interacted with. I apologize for our "bad RP" to happen with you guys. I'd also like to add that you're faction is the only faction we have "bad" relations with and if for some reason we have "bad" relations with others I'm very curious to know. We've had a "bad" interaction with one other faction and to be completely honest it was fun RP because we had a disagreement that we handled IC. I apologize that one IC interaction upset you enough to swarm my application with -1's. I will no longer be responding to messages regarding this matter thank you for your feedback I will gladly take it into account and use it going forward.

From my understanding the bill was paid I'm having problem understanding why my application has to become a battle ground for arguing. This seems like it's an IC problem. I can understand that you didn't like the RP and came here to post your opinion. But simply shit talking is not necessary. Please feel free to reach out on discord if you want to further solve this issue.

Can you explain what caused all this?? I think I’m a little confused

O haras being run to the ground after OG Don left. @Hammer

+1 Bring back the good ole days

May be a shot in the dark, but I think pictures taken by players should be placeable. Almost similar to the typewriter, I feel it could add more to RP. I'd love to walk into a bar and see family portraits, pictures taken with famous people within the city, and or political figures. It could also possibly bring blackmailing?? Being able to show in game pictures as a prop could bring some good RP. I'm not aware of any recent suggestions for this and or if its already kind of a thing. Please correct me if I'm wrong.

You know what putting aside what everyone said I can see your vision. Although I agree with what everyone has said I hope the best for you. I think with some rework and more time you can make it work. +1

I appreciate the feedback. I'm sorry to hear you didn't like the origin story if you have any more questions feel free to reach out. Your feedback will be taken into account.

I apologize in advance for the book Thanks for your feedback. To answer your questions, for our proposed business ideas, we have high ambitions. The main focus of our faction is going to be trade. Criminal trade, legal trade, you name it. Most of our services will be kept behind a membership fee. We’d like to introduce different package options for different budgets. Once paid, the VIP will have access to whatever service is available with their package.We intend to offer an all in one exclusive trade hub where you can acquire anything to your heart's desire. No having to hunt for 1 specific guy for 1 specific item. We would like to make the club a neutral zone for paid VIP members. This can be a place factions come to dispute issues without having to worry about one starting drama. With that being said, we would need to keep on good terms with most factions. To further elaborate on our “Business over Bloodshed” Ideology, this simply means we honor trying to negotiate and arrange a deal to solve a problem with mutual benefit. However, this would not make us a peaceful faction. If someone impedes on us, and is unreasonable, we will shut it down. No hesitation. When I say we are business based, I mean we mean business. We would also like to host private auctions. These would be different from normal auctions, as they would showcase exclusive and lucrative items, starting at dirt cheap. This would give high incentive to our VIP packages. We want to create a private hole in the wall high class establishment, where factions would not have to worry about their safety, but could unwind in a classy comfort. We would very much like to implement a private gambling parlor inside the club, as well as fashion shows. These fashion shows would give players a chance to show off their best outfits. The contestants for these shows would be judged by a selection of judges from different backgrounds, as to not pose any bias. The top 3 winners of the show would win an assortment of prizes. Our number one quality is RP. If accepted, we aim to bring much life to the server. As for standing around RP, most definitely a club would bring that. Our goal is to implement more opportunities for new members. Security meaning anytime a higher member is to go somewhere any of the new hires can attend. A meeting? the new hire can tag along at the higher members discretion. Errand running is also something we'd like to implement into our business. New hires can be tasked at the higher members discretion such as retrieving equipment, delivering packages, and more. I understand that standing around RP is almost unavoidable with almost any business. Our goal is to try and mitigate it as much as possible. I also understand that putting trust in new hires is a risk because anyone can pocket some money and run off. It's a risk we're willing to make if it means better RP. If any of your questions are unanswered please reach out. I'm always happy to help out. We don't plan to add poles to the club fortunately lol. Agreed fuck Billy Kimber. I’d also like to add that I’ve made changes to the backstory with your advice in mind.

I'm sorry to see that you aren't a fan of our backstory. Was there anything in particular? Please feel free to lmk my dms are always open or feel free to post it here. I appreciate your feed back and if there is anything I can do to help you out or make our backstory more enjoyable feel free to reach out.

I appreciate the feed back and I totally agree with restaurant rp. Our vision goes further than just your average bar, lounge or restaurant. If you'd like to get more info feel free to reach out. I hope to see you in the city and get some good rp going.

+1 I say why not it could bring a new style of RP between two MC's. Possibly bar brawls, club parties. It wouldn't hurt to give em a shot

+1 I've run with almost all the Irish factions this cities had. From the Flanagan's to the O'Hara's, Irish RP is always great and is much needed in the city with its current state of 5 million Italian families.

I could see why you'd think this and I could also see why you wouldn't believe me If I told you we surely won't be doing that. Our goal is to bring diversity and fun rp to the city. I'd be more than happy to give you more details if interested. I appreciate your feed back and will take into account of things not to do.

Name of Faction: The Wright Crime Family Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 31 and Growing Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Crime Family Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): English, (British) Name of Character running the faction: Daniel Fernsby Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): ___alex____#0638 Your SteamID: 76561198829389343 Your Server playtime: 3weeks 2days 7hours (559 hours) Do you acknowledge and agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page? (Yes/No): Yes Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned by us? (Yes/No): Yes Provide an example of the unique Roleplay your faction will bring to the server/what type of roleplay we can expect from your faction (Images/Videos Preferred): We aim to be a higher class of faction. Bringing elegance and luxury to the city, tying in with our British heritage. As our main business, we would run a gentleman’s club/lounge. This would be considered a higher class establishment, where a strict dress code would be enforced to uphold our classy appearance. Once established, regular members will have the opportunity to purchase a VIP membership to the club where once a member, they will have the opportunity to enter into exclusive giveaways, enter private auctions for exclusive items, eat and drink for free for life, attend private parties, participate in a gentleman's boxing league and much more. We intend to be more business focused, rather than on bloodshed. We aim to have a well established private society, with an illegal racket running in the background. We also plan to have a tailoring shop as an addition onto the club. We aim to make buying clothing a new way of Rping. For example, if someone is to come in looking for a suit we would measure the individual and tailor the suit to them to ensure each item purchased feels personal to the buyer. This will apply for hats, shirts, jackets, and pants. VIP membership would also apply to the tailoring shop, bringing discounts and first dibs on newly stocked clothing items. For our members, we aim to offer a unique and refreshing roleplay experience. Don’t expect the typical stand in front of the door guard that everyone is tired of. We will offer immersive tasks and roleplay for our members to keep them engaged, even from the lowest rank. Provide examples or event ideas to promote activity within your faction and keep people interested. (Reference your unique RP from the question above): As stated above, we plan to hold private auctions for our "High Roller VIPS". The auctions would start at a much lower price than buying price so there will be a real incentive for people to participate. For faction members we aim to hold weekly "block parties" where faction members and guests can come to mingle. Appreciation and awards will be handed out to top performers of the week. We also want to give new people who come to the faction a more enjoyable time. No more sitting on a door for five years. We aim to have different positions for new members. For example errand runners, bodyguards, drivers, and bartending. One of our biggest goals is to keep new members interested instead of staring into the street senselessly. We plan to have open bar nights where drinks and food are free for anyone. To further iterate on our faction being heavily business based, we intend to build relations with other factions, but in the scenario that someone tries impeding on our business we wont hesitate to show face. Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LA-v8vhceDd7glelu3bKljk8_Z80g2Qk3ZwEkOK7mrs/edit?usp=sharing