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May be a shot in the dark, but I think pictures taken by players should be placeable. Almost similar to the typewriter, I feel it could add more to RP. I'd love to walk into a bar and see family portraits, pictures taken with famous people within the city, and or political figures. It could also possibly bring blackmailing?? Being able to show in game pictures as a prop could bring some good RP. I'm not aware of any recent suggestions for this and or if its already kind of a thing. Please correct me if I'm wrong.

+1/-1 I can see the idea of where you guys are aiming. But it's only realistic for the first week or so you guys are in the server. Long term I see the faction dying due to no one wanting to continue the fishing docks rp. I also would like another hispanic faction back into the server for the diversity. All-in-all there's better picks in the faction application list right now. I'd say you guys are right in the middle at lke, number 3.

I was gonna say everything @Fox said but he beat me to it

+1 I've had RP interactions with them in game and they are very RP driven. From meetings, to their bar rp. Very impressive stuff they have going on in the city. Huge plus one!

Your Character or Steam Name: sptdrk420 Your SteamID: STEAM_0:0:155841876 Your Discord ID#: Pitcher6370 Reason for ban: I was banned on the Discords as well as in game for talking shit that wasnt true Length of ban: perma Reason for appeal (dispute/apology): Im unbanned in game now after my appeal and i still have no access in the discord for important in game processes. Why should you be unbanned? because im back on the server!

I updated the appeal. Let me know if anything else needs to be added. Thanks for reading sir.

-1 Lackluster application that doesn't really make sense. IMO you had the chance to do something quite unique and kind of flopped it. PRO - I see what you're trying to do, and I'll give props where it's due. - Decent enough RP ideas. Not sure if they'll pan out the way you're expecting though - Decent enough play time. CON - Togna Bologna is a dumb name and I can't take it seriously. - Your backstory is an absolute mess. What are you, a charitable organisation, a cult, a criminal enterprise... your backstory does not explain this at all. There are parts of it that dont make sense, you even spelled your characters name wrong at one point. You also mention 'the home' 11 times and 'the hand' 7 times - The cult idea is entirely lost. A cult isn't a brotherhood of individuals trying to make a city better, it's a fanatical group which usually has an eccentric leader who controls the people below him, you are not describing this in your backstory. - If you're a cult I want to know outright what your rank is, Supreme Leader, Grand Master? this should be absolutely pivotal to your backstory, and how your character rose to that rank and or gave himself the rank. - I hate this idea of 'we're going to clean up the city by locking up buildings and making sure places are protected, people will consider you a nuisance. - You call yourself the 'Hand of Paimon' but make no link to what 'Paimon' is? IMO (take these suggestions with a pinch of salt.) - You should really play into the cult idea and really go full hog with it, become fanatics who believe some mad shit, like you (the faction leader) are an actual descendent of God, and the people in your factions are disciples. - Whilst I said I hate the 'clean up the city' stuff, I do understand why you included it... IMO you should flip that too and instead of cleaning up the city, be the ones that are causing the damage. 'The Lucchese's are none-believers... we will show them no mercy'. There is no fear in the city anymore, a full blown heel faction of cultists could change that

only 30%, I say it's not AI, Just has some good grammar.

-1 This application seems to be labeled as a cult but I see nothing cult-like about it. Seems to me that this is just another crime family with a cult mask on. Where do the cult aspects show in any of the documents in your application? I don't see any ideology, worshipped supernatural being, or any activities that would even be comparable to that of what comes to mind from the word "cult". Murder for hire and all these other things aren't new, or really cult exclusive. I've seen applications for "cult" factions on these forums before and they usually end up either getting denied or modified into a crime family. While it's certainly abnormal in regards to the organization, I think this would need more cult-like feel in it for it to be something I'd say has a chance of doing good. Also, I've looked at all your documents and I still have no idea what the name "Paimon" refers to or has to do with anything here. Is that your godly figure? Is that a name you made up because it sounded cool? I've even used ctrl + f to find all instances of the word in all of your documents and it only exists within the title of the organization. Regardless of if it is something you created yourself, or something that already exists, it would be useful to tie that in to activities you have planned out and explain how your "Cult" revolves around that figure. TLDR: This application reads like if the dark brotherhood didn't care about Sithis anymore but kept the name and became a mafia; -1. If you want to start a cult, develop your ideology further and make it feel like one, not just named like one.

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+1 I'd like to at least see how the faction will integrate the 'cult' aspect within the city. It could introduce a different type of rp than just running bricks for the don.

With the way things are in the server, you cannot be totally neutral, hence why i'm saying that people won't trust you for that. There's factions that are currently using a retainer system, trust me man it's not unique. The whole "working security for 20 minutes" nowadays is literally just shitpost slander dawg, almost nobody does this anymore cause it's in the interest for factions to make the experience interesting for the new guys. The "slow-burn" rp you're referencing is just how things are in the majority. There is a minority of cases where somebody will get a higher position due to external circumstances but that's a rare occurrence. You can't not have "slow-burn" rp for the pure fact that you gotta trust the person before giving him a bigger cut of the pie so that's literally just how most factions operate. That being said, props for taking all this in and being involved with it. The majority of the server(besides the retarded trolls) are aching for some diversity. It's just gotta be thought out and done the right way or else it's just gonna be another faction that disappears after 3 months.

If my vote counts, then +1 New original faction style as well as original backstory tied to the city, and recent enough other people could actually corroborate aspects of it. Wish it had more cult content included in the story, but its probably bc from my perspective most cults don't necessarily promote their ritualistic or ceremonial practices. I am actually really excited for the retainer system to employ its members, I hope it actually works out by maintaining members who actually get paid to work for the organization, and not the other way around Loads of opportunity, though I think the backstory is likely the weakest link of this application simply bc the community seems to want to actually see the rituals and human sacrifices being mentioned or happening. Thank you everyone thus far for the feedback.

I appreciate your support Thank you for sharing. I am unfamiliar w him myself so I dont know how much of a dumb stupidy head he could be

+1 amazing askull is a retard

Thank you for sharing. Would you like to share your biggest concern?

I am grateful for the positive feedback I do see the general consensus being concerned with the backstory not incorporating more cult like elements. The original plan was to include general ideas around human sacrifice as well cannibalism though we wanted to have it more hidden on top of a concern of UA not approving the whole idea of cutting up a murdered person and feeding it through the soup kitchen. Rather than telling people we were gonna do that, we figured we would just simply do it. We will absolutely be reevaluating the team as well as the approach for the idea. OPur main concern was wanting to do something original to the server, granted many other organizations have already been done. We have had cartels rise and fall, we have had the mentioned polish, we have jhad Irish, Muslims, etc. We already have Jews, Americans, LOADS of Italians, as well as a rising Spanish and British clan (all the best of luck and wishes to them <3) so we were attempting to do a new approach than recommend something we have already seen done. My main take from this application would be to include more actual details about the cult activity to happen rather than keep it behind closed doors. Again, thank you for the positive feedback

You know what putting aside what everyone said I can see your vision. Although I agree with what everyone has said I hope the best for you. I think with some rework and more time you can make it work. +1

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Going to need a better appeal than this. Try again in a few weeks.

Can you speak on the ban evasion attempts?

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I see where youyr concern is with tasking others with a cleanup of that nature, though i'vve personally had other factions do hits for me as well as celanup. There is market out there, you just havent touched it. I am grateful for your input on the matter though and appreciate your input. I would like to bring a deesirable experience to the city by adding more dynamics to rp between factions Youre absolutely right on Uniqu rp though the examples I did give, if they DO exist in the server today, arent being utilized. All we see around town is minges or dudes on park benches. The retainer itself hasnt been done in the server as a COD method for obtaining items FOR the company rather than have them stand around 20 minutes, hire the guy, then say "hey bring us back X amount of $ by this date or else" leaving newer players with ALL of the new information they've gained just to try and execute everything on thier own. Im not by any means saying lets hold thier hands, but it includes them more directly in tasks Not to mention the proposed "slow-burn" rp where as many places you see or know about have new members who get transferred from other companies, or are old returning players who gaiin membership with no RP or anything like that but are still blessed with management. We aim to combat this by having every single initiate go through the same processes and procedures in order to gauge the initiates skills in order to place them in the correct department.

I appreciate the effort that was put into this, but this app reeks of gimmick diversity. The word "Cult" is only in the title, when the argument gets brought up you basically reply with "I didn't wanna state anything particular you have to accept this app and see" which is not how this works. The "Unique RP Examples" have been done to an extent by the majority of factions currently active. The only "new" idea that's not currently done is the Soup kitchen but that is directly antithetical to you guys being a FUCKING CULT. Also who the fuck is gonna hire a different faction to clean up their mess? Why would anyone trust you with that? -1