The Wright Family Application

[Geo_Zeus]

+1 Met these guys in-game, pretty good RP, even with whatever anyone else is saying at least they're not sitting on railings and chairs jerking eachother off 10 hours a day.

[V1KING]

On 1/1/2026 at 11:22 PM, Fox said:

As someone who ran pretty much the only successful British faction for a number of years, i'll give you my input.
 

+1 - I think the app is pretty decent, and I wish you guys all the best.

PRO

- Diverse, it's great to see someone else attempt a British faction.

- Play time seems alright.

- I liked the backstory to a degree, although it does have some issues. 

 

CON 

- The breaks in the backstory are frustrating and some of them don't really add anything to the story. IMO you'd benefit from bigger time gaps, to add more text to your paragraphs. 

- I don't think you give enough examples of how you intend to be different from other factions. The VIP club thing is actually something we used to do weirdly lol. I'd like to hear more about your proposed business ideas, if you're steering clear of violence for a more business approach, how? you mention you want to steer clear away from standing around RP but by owning a club, you're going to end up with standing around RP.

 

Considerations

- Take it from me, you should decide early on if you're going to try and get people to talk in an english accent, or just the main guys etc. In TDS, I benefited greatly from the high command being actually British (for the most part) because trying to do this down the lines flops extremely hard.

- You mentioned a gentlemen's club, don't put poles in it for the love of God - learn from my mistake lmfao.

- Fuck Billy Kimber, here's what happened to the last Kimber. https://streamable.com/fu3qcz

I apologize in advance for the book 

Thanks for your feedback. To answer your questions, for our proposed business ideas, we have high ambitions. The main focus of our faction is going to be trade. Criminal trade, legal trade, you name it. Most of our services will be kept behind a membership fee. We’d like to introduce different package options for different budgets. Once paid, the VIP will have access to whatever service is available with their package.We intend to offer an all in one exclusive trade hub where you can acquire anything to your heart's desire. No having to hunt for 1 specific guy for 1 specific item. We would like to make the club a neutral zone for paid VIP members. This can be a place factions come to dispute issues without having to worry about one starting drama. With that being said, we would need to keep on good terms with most factions. To further elaborate on our “Business over Bloodshed” Ideology, this simply means we honor trying to negotiate and arrange a deal to solve a problem with mutual benefit. However, this would not make us a peaceful faction. If someone impedes on us, and is unreasonable, we will shut it down. No hesitation. When I say we are business based, I mean we mean business. 

 

We would also like to host private auctions. These would be different from normal auctions, as they would showcase exclusive and lucrative items, starting at dirt cheap. This would give high incentive to our VIP packages. We want to create a private hole in the wall high class establishment, where factions would not have to worry about their safety, but could unwind in a classy comfort. We would very much like to implement a private gambling parlor inside the club, as well as fashion shows. These fashion shows would give players a chance to show off their best outfits. The contestants for these shows would be judged by a selection of judges from different backgrounds, as to not pose any bias. The top 3 winners of the show would win an assortment of prizes. Our number one quality is RP. If accepted, we aim to bring much life to the server. 

As for standing around RP, most definitely a club would bring that. Our goal is to implement more opportunities for new members. Security meaning anytime a higher member is to go somewhere any of the new hires can attend. A meeting? the new hire can tag along at the higher members discretion. Errand running is also something we'd like to implement into our business. New hires can be tasked at the higher members discretion such as retrieving equipment, delivering packages, and more. I understand that standing around RP is almost unavoidable with almost any business. Our goal is to try and mitigate it as much as possible. I also understand that putting trust in new hires is a risk because anyone can pocket some money and run off. It's a risk we're willing to make if it means better RP. If any of your questions are unanswered please reach out. I'm always happy to help out.  

 

We don't plan to add poles to the club fortunately lol. 

Agreed fuck Billy Kimber.

I’d also like to add that I’ve made changes to the backstory with your advice in mind.

[Izumi]

+1 Diamond Syndicate 2.0

[Togna Bologna]

+1.  Ive definately seen them around and love the rp they offer.

but another clothing store / bar and lounge? almost a -1.

I have seen less playtime run an organization so I dont knock that aspect; and your faction backstory feels like character lore moreso than organization origins, though I wish you al the best of luck

Edited Friday at 05:49 AM by Togna Bologna
We homies

[V1KING]

1 hour ago, Togna Bologna said:

+1 originally bc Ive definately seen them around

but another clothing store / bar and lounge? -1

I have seen less playtime run an organization so I dont knock that aspect; and your faction backstory feels like character lore moreso than organization origins.

I appreciate the feedback. I'm sorry to hear you didn't like the origin story if you have any more questions feel free to reach out. Your feedback will be taken into account.

[Sauerkraut]

+1

I've had RP interactions with them in game and they are very RP driven. From meetings, to their bar rp. Very impressive stuff they have going on in the city. Huge plus one!

[Banmaster777]

+1 Solid leadership, these guys have been around for a long, long years, the faction members create an enjoyable, classic Diverge RP.

[Vizionz]

+1 great idea and great people.

[Bullets]

+1 HC has ex-successful faction leaders in it, I've heard good things about them aswell.

Edited 4 hours ago by Bullets

[EliteGotRekt]

+1 idk what to say i didnt read it but cool idea for surely we back

[Trak]

 

Already -1'd sorry

Edited 2 hours ago by Trak

[Hammer]

On 12/25/2025 at 3:11 PM, Trak said:

-1 more un unique restaurant rp everyone and their mother has restaurant rp no unique ideas here.

also dont even wanna pay for a simple fucking meal. already starting bad relations with people. The bill was 2100.

Okay just to set the record on this. You forced some BS "private party" onto the bill which we didn't agree to, we are British and as an actual Brit we are tight as fuck with money so makes sense in RP. You got the money and are also bringing up un unique restaurant RP when running a restaurant. Make that make sense.

If you would like to discuss this situation properly, feel free to DM me

Edited 2 hours ago by Hammer

[RotTech]

-1

they ate my restaurant and gave us a hard time about paying, the bill was $2100, how can you be a faction if you can't even afford 2k. Dreed to see what a "high class faction" that behavior will create

Edited 2 hours ago by RotTech

[TonyFC]

The city doesn't need more stale restaurant RP, the Application isn't very detailed. This needs some work NGL

[Trak]

4 minutes ago, Hammer said:

Okay just to set the record on this. You forced some BS "private party" onto the bill which we didn't agree to, we are British and as an actual Brit we are tight as fuck with money so makes sense in RP. You got the money and are also bringing up un unique restaurant RP when running a restaurant. Make that make sense.

If you would like to discuss this situation properly, feel free to DM me

I did not add in the price of that I stated that saying you're refusing to pay a 2100 bill when normally we charge that much. Everywhere does. I was calling you broke. brokie.

[Bullets]

Niggas are mad about people not wanting to pay an IC bill

[Homeslicey]

-1 Terrible interaction with this group already, they don't seem to have the intent to roleplay properly. Application is lacking. Group does not seem unique at all.

[Trak]

6 minutes ago, Bullets said:

Niggas are mad about people not wanting to pay an IC bill

what happened that 47m? brokie.

[TonyFC]

7 minutes ago, Bullets said:

Niggas are mad about people not wanting to pay an IC bill

Hammer already has one failed faction under his belt, doesn't he? Sorry if people don't have much confidence 

[HydesDad]

These guys had a strange woman dance on our table during dinner. Completely killed our appetite. Forgive us if we were hesitant at the exuberant price charged for a simple meal.

10 minutes ago, Homeslicey said:

-1 Terrible interaction with this group already, they don't seem to have the intent to roleplay properly. Application is lacking. Group does not seem unique at all.

 

[Homeslicey]

7 minutes ago, HydesDad said:

These guys had a strange woman dance on our table during dinner. Completely killed our appetite. Forgive us if we were hesitant at the exuberant price charged for a simple meal.

 

Provide an example of the unique Roleplay your faction will bring to the server/what type of roleplay we can expect from your faction (Images/Videos Preferred):

We aim to be a higher class of faction. Bringing elegance and luxury to the city, tying in with our British heritage. As our main business, we would run a gentleman’s club/lounge. This would be considered a higher class establishment, where a strict dress code would be enforced to uphold our classy appearance. Once established, regular members will have the opportunity to purchase a VIP membership to the club where once a member, they will have the opportunity to enter into exclusive giveaways, enter private auctions for exclusive items, eat and drink for free for life, attend private parties, participate in a gentleman's boxing league and much more. We intend to be more business focused, rather than on bloodshed. We aim to have a well established private society, with an illegal racket running in the background. For our members, we aim to offer a unique and refreshing roleplay experience. Don’t expect the typical stand in front of the door guard that everyone is tired of. We will offer immersive tasks and roleplay for our members to keep them engaged, even from the lowest rank. 

Yet you want to run a gentleman's club...

[Bullets]

47 minutes ago, TonyFC said:

Hammer already has one failed faction under his belt, doesn't he? Sorry if people don't have much confidence 

The faction failed when he left due to unknown reasons, when he was the boss of O'Hara it was ran very well.

Edited 1 hour ago by Bullets

[Bullets]

50 minutes ago, Trak said:

what happened that 47m? brokie.

Its abundantly clear you are my fan, I've never heard of you and you know so much about me.  Let me know when your second property gets seized because you lack activity.

[TonyFC]

3 minutes ago, Bullets said:

Its abundantly clear you are my fan, I've never heard of you and you know so much about me.  Let me know when your second property gets seized because you lack activity.

You should've lost yours forever ago then 

[Trak]

4 minutes ago, Bullets said:

Its abundantly clear you are my fan, I've never heard of you and you know so much about me.  Let me know when your second property gets seized because you lack activity.