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+1 I have a soft spot for cartels due to my first faction in Diverge being DVN. When Cartels work they work really well. I think this app is definitely one of the better ones, and wish you all the best. PRO - I really enjoyed the backstory, was very well written, loved the formatting/font usage etc. - The video was a nice move, great to see. The interview one was a bit lengthy though. I'd of made it a bit snappier, maybe added some distortion/CRT effects over the top, either way awesome to see something out of the box. - Good play time. - Enjoyed the accents in the video, I hope you'll encourage more members to adopt it. - I enjoy the diverse nationality. Neutral - I'm not a big fan of the 'hidden' approach. I always see applications time and time again about 'moving in the shadows', 'professional businessmen' etc. I for once would love to see a faction application that is straight up 'we intend to dress like cartel members and just be violent for violence sake.' CON - Very light con. Whilst I enjoyed your food truck idea, I definitely think you could've given us at least another RP idea that is specifically cartel related. As well as your cigar lounge, I can see this very quickly becoming 'standing around security RP'. You could've written something up about having new hires move prop bricks from a boat back to HQ or something like that.

I think the ban is fair and a solid enough time for you to review the rules. You have extensive PO's, some of which are exactly what you have been banned for in this instance. Your ban appeal has been reviewed and denied. We have determined this ban to be reasonable and/or justified. Ensure you have read our Server Rules.

As Wickers has said. You have an extensive record in only a few months of playing. I think a week is an appropriate amount of time for you to read the rules and come back. Your ban appeal has been reviewed and denied. We have determined this ban to be reasonable and/or justified. Ensure you have read our Server Rules.

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Nikolai Smirnov reign of terror then getting clapped by Diamond

Updated for 14K

My guesses are Newl, Newt, Merriam or Mendel

Updated for Lucchese 2026. Going to start doing the rounds, so be prepared.

Okay, understood... but what you've done there is confirm that your faction intends to be exactly like everyone elses bar the contracts part. IMO you need more original RP ideas

Was asked to drop an in-depth review on this one. +1 with consideration Pro - Good play time - Enjoyed the layout of the backstory and enjoyed reading the backstory. - Well written and easy to understand. - I like the diversity Con - I found your actual forum post a bit hard to read because it's a solid wall of text, I think if you either broke it down or moved it into a G doc it would be easier to read. - You repeat yourself a bit too much talking about the organization of the faction rather than giving us actual unique RP ideas. - This is a soft con, your whole faction idea revolves around doing PKs as contracts - everybody in a faction wants to do PKs, it's one of the most fun things to do... You need to explain why a faction would go through you guys rather than give it to one of their guys for RP enrichment. Saying 'we're professional killers' isn't enough for me. Advice - I think for fun RP you should do what I call 'demi-kills' essentially giving your lower guys a kill contract and have one of your other guys swap to an alt so they can kill them *safely* with some good RP ops. Will definitely help if there are no actual 'contracts' to keep people entertained. - I think all in all, for me personally I'd need to understand what do you intend to do if nobody wants to hire you for PKs.

-1 Con - Your application is a mess, the grammar, spelling and lack of spaces is making it hard to read - Low playtime - You make a bunch of references to a 'discotecas'. I read the whole paragaraph and I still don't know what that is. - In your 'unique' RP, you wrote a bunch of words that all equate to 'wear nice clothes', 'smoke and sell cigars', there is nothing unique here. - Your 'unique event' doesn't give me anything to go on, it's all been done before. - The main problem I have here is that your backstory looks to have massive AI portions, it's quite obvious to tell and the writing style in your backstory doesn't match that of your forum post. If you look at 'They controlled Bogotá, Medellín, Cali, and most of Colombia’s southern, central, and northern regions—though not all. They had access to intelligence and networks that other syndicates couldn’t even approach. ' Compared to 'The Day They Killed Elias Developed Like A normal morning Elias Had A drinking Problem He always drank everywhere he had a business meeting he was on a helicopter the people with him were allied and knew what was gonna happen they knew dario was gonna kill him so Dario and Flaco went to another building near where the helicopter' It's extremely obvious. People work extremely hard on their applications and put real man hours into it. You appear to have chosen the easy route. Whilst I appreciate english may not be your first language, potentially - you could've had someone proof read it and make edits for you. Pro - The idea might be good, but you need to take this advice away and come back again IMO. Advice - Rewrite your entire story yourself, dont just do it really quick, take some time on it. - Have someone proof read it so that it makes sense. - DITCH AI. - Come up with some unique roleplay ideas that relate to your faction idea.

Simps

You didn't even try with this one, I'm not even gonna waste my time giving you constructive criticism.

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