A soft +1
PRO
- Diverse
- Experienced enough player who would possibly do good in the position
- I like the idea of making your low faction members wear clothing you have picked, some factions do this decent enough, but if it's done well I think it's a good RP navigator.
CON
- The red and black in the google doc is an eyesore.
- The backstory is lack luster and super generic. You go into more detail about the members of your faction than you do about the actual faction itself. I want to read more about how the faction got started, the means of it's survival and how it's going to move forward.
- Your RP ideas are also extremely generic, there is nothing different than any other faction.
- Security companies don't work. I.e why would the Lucchese hire a security faction when they have 1000 throwaway associates?
Something to consider:
- As Kurt pointed out, RPing as Russian, or any other nationality for that matter can be difficult and you run the risk of your faction becoming generic if you don't encourage people to use an accent etc. I'd highly recommend writing an RP guide and if you get accepted, really drilling it into people and even go as far as maybe not hiring people who refuse to participate in the Eastern Europe RP.