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+/- Not a bad application but definitely things to consider. PRO - Different ethnicity - Loved the backstory, (could be more but it was an enjoyable read) CON - Low playtime. It seems you have some sort of grasp on what is required to be a faction leader, but i'd still recommend getting some more time under your belt. - Some of the RP ideas you wrote down seem to be quite generic, could do with being padded out a little and given more explanation - The use of words like storyline and ' Now they're in Liberty City' make me wonder if you wrote this for a FiveM server and have copied and pasted it - You make multiple references to cocaine, when in all likelihood if you got accepted, you wouldn't get the cocaine racket.

+/- PRO - Different nationality - Some interesting RP ideas [needs more padding, see below] - Decent play time. CON - Backstory is extremely lackluster. You rely too much on 'we're doing this because the italians did it'. Doesn't make sense to me that Greek nationals would go 'oh lets set up in the US because the Italians did it and are making a lot of money'. I want to hear about the beginnings of the family, how did they come to be, what are their names and a REAL reason to go to the US. Your backstory didn't make me want to read more. - Your RP ideas, whilst quite interesting aren't padded enough IMO. You talk about doing a sort of 'olympics' style event, but then in the next line you say 'Oh but we can't be bothered to make the dupe until we get approved'... adding images and putting the time in can only help an application. - You need to think more about how you're going to stand out as a faction, nothing in your app tells me how your faction is going to be different than any other faction that gets in. Tell me how you're different. - Walls of text. I know using a google doc isn't necessary but it really helps the reader to engage with the story. A huge block of text isn't very nice to look at. Use of images can help too.

I get the incentive behind it but you'd essentially have to either get everyone to change their Medal settings or have them run their clip through some sort of video editing software for it to count as IC. Just seems a bit much just for a visual effect is all

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+/- Davis Boys was good, I enjoyed our RP a few years ago but the faction kind of fell off. This application is very lackluster and you rely way too much on past RP (don't get me wrong, I see how it's relevant) but you offer almost zero information on the faction, past and present and it seems very lazy. PRO + Good RPer and has experience in a faction leader position. + Great play time, understands the rules of the server. CON - Backstory is incredibly lacking, applicants spend hours on their applications, yours is just barely over the wordcount. In the small write up you did provide, it reads really well, but there isn't enough. You have the opportunity to write out the entire Davis Boys storyline and how it ended, and how it's beginning again as the Harrison Family... but you didn't do that? - No information on unique roleplay. "Private things like meetings, the hiring process" how is this any different from any other faction. Every faction has a hiring process and has meetings... how is your hiring process / meetings any different from the others? You mention it's 'Fun for those coming in'... how?

Quite a broad accusation to say you have literally no evidence whatsoever...

Hold on. So you used AI to generate an apology on the premise of 'English isn't my first language', then wrote a reply to someone with pretty solid spelling, punctuation and grammar without the use of AI? Seems legit

This is more about physical items than props?

Noticed during this conflict there is a lot of people spawning terrible garbage bag props. Think it would be interesting if there was an actual 'Trash Bag' item that you could put certain items inside of. I.e you can use a trash bag on a burger on the floor and it will put it inside of a bag in your inventory, with the option to now empty it / see what's inside with a progression bar that says 'emptying'. Would be good for body parts and such, realistically if you cut a body up you would wrap the parts in a bag before dumping somewhere. Might enable people to actually put trash in trash bins and give the scallywag brokie hobo's something else to scavenge through.

Then make a UA ticket?

Locks to PD during conflict would be a good idea but: Why are you not calling staff if this is happening so often? If you're suggesting that people are essentially hopping on their PD chars to interrupt escalation then it's metagame which is a staff issue.

I had this idea a while ago and managed to replicate a scratch system in google docs. Was a bit of a ballache though. An actual system would be really cool

Your appeal has been reviewed and denied. We have determined this PK to be reasonable and/or justified. You may not re-appeal this PK.

It's interesting that your counterpart in this situation also posted an appeal for the same thing, but was at least open and honest about the rule break, but your appeal is suggesting there was no wrongdoing? Your ban appeal has been reviewed and denied. We have determined this ban to be reasonable and/or justified. Ensure you have read our Server Rules.

I've reviewed the above and I'm willing to give you the benefit of the doubt as you have owned up to your rule break and apologised for it, also. I will reduce the ban to 4 days, but as stated by yourself - please use this time to read the rules around valid PK's and ensure you are familiar with these rules before attempting PK's once you return to the server. -- Your ban appeal has been reviewed and accepted. The ban will be reduced to 4 days