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+1 PRO: - Diverse - I really enjoyed your RP suggestions, they're out of the box and I think will work quite well. - I really like the idea of your faction being morally 'good' guys, found that quite interesting. - Backstory was a decent read, few mistakes i.e 'Whenever their father died, Pavel Popov took over for the family' This reads like the father frequently dies and someone has to take over lol. CON - I hate the Google slides doc, mainly the grey text on black background. Would be so much easier to read if it was just white. - The text in the forum post gets kind of 'wall of texty' I kinda wish you'd of broken that down in a google doc too Considerations - I think you're going to have to work that extra bit hard to keep your ideas alive and not become like every other faction, people love to shoot guns and be dicks and I think as soon as you waver from the 'serious' RP of your faction, this will start to creep in.

Would kind of be interesting but it would have to be done at permaprop level (i guess similar to your image) ain't no way Pendred gonna' have time to constantly retexture billboards lmao.

+/- I think people are being a bit unfair on this one. Seems like you have some good ideas but your actual application is a bit lackluster. I think if you could take away some of my points and update your application, you might be onto something, with some consideration. PRO: - The diverse angle of everyone being African-American is interesting. - Your backstory and the core idea of everyone being 'pimps' is quite unique. - I enjoyed some of your RP ideas. CON - I fucking hate the name Pimp's Paradise. There are so many better names - The entire point of your faction revolves around clothing, this means you're going to need to have some serious custom items or at the very least, the funds to keep a constant stock of custom items for your guys. Why would I join 'Pimp's Paradise' over another faction if you're going to make me wear clothes from the clothing store, if you get me. - Because your application is a wall of text, it's hard to decipher. Even by making each required category bold would help. Consideration: - From personal experience, owning a strip club in Diverge is going to get you labeled as a gay bar almost immediately. - This does read a little like a Supreme clone. You need to make it very obvious that you are two different factions, but in the same breath we have a ton of Italian factions that are quite similar so it couldn't hurt to have two blacks.

Only if you change your name to Sabrina

-1 Not a bad application. I enjoyed part of the backstory but to me it seems that you didn't write the whole thing. PRO - Different nationality - Part of the backstory is really good, interesting and really touches on the history of the faction CON - In your backstory, your writing style entirely changes. The first half of it, is written with extremely good punctuation and descriptive element's. It's like a book. Then just before the images come in, this changes entirely with random capital letters, no punctuation and things just not making sense? i.e 'If U look Under The police arrived' This to me tells me that you've had someone else write the backstory (which is fine i guess), or you have taken it from elsewhere. - Your RP ideas are OK at a glance but it is extremely difficult to read, matching with the second part of the backstory. - Your play time is too low. You should take more time to see what it actually takes be HC in a faction.

Updated for: Kosher Nostra

Decent enough suggestion but IMO it just kind of removes the real risk of murdering someone. Make it harder, not easier imo lool

They had fantastic RP. 0 favouritism from me here kidda. If you have shit hiring RP, I'll call it out, and they didn't.

Here you go

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Updated for: Gambino

I've had this exact same thought before. I've used the typewriter for VHS tapes during events in the past. +1

Could always ask a GM to get involved and have your bikes recoloured or something lol

+/- Hm, not a bad application but could be a lot better. Your example of unique RP is seriously lacking. 'Going out to get food', like every other faction on the server. That section is perfect for telling us how your faction is different from others and it just falls totally flat on its's face. I want to hear about stuff like bike races, bike showcases and that kind of stuff, not 'oh we're going to go get food as a group'. I also hate that you're making this application to immediately bum boy the SOS. I understand that people have their allies but it seems weird to just immediately ally with the only other biker group in the server, rather than open it up to some competition with each other. PRO - Another biker club could be fun. - Diversity - Enjoyed the backstory. CON - Extremely lackluster RP ideas. - Basically a sub-faction of SOS. - Gives no actual evidence how this would be any different to SOS.

IMO all people within a faction should be able to hire with good RP, shouldn't depend on the location See update