Fox Posted July 2 Share Posted July 2 (edited) +/- Not a bad application but definitely things to consider. PRO - Different ethnicity - Loved the backstory, (could be more but it was an enjoyable read) CON - Low playtime. It seems you have some sort of grasp on what is required to be a faction leader, but i'd still recommend getting some more time under your belt. - Some of the RP ideas you wrote down seem to be quite generic, could do with being padded out a little and given more explanation - The use of words like storyline and ' Now they're in Liberty City' make me wonder if you wrote this for a FiveM server and have copied and pasted it - You make multiple references to cocaine, when in all likelihood if you got accepted, you wouldn't get the cocaine racket. Edited July 2 by Fox 1 Link to comment
Anton Posted July 15 Share Posted July 15 (edited) The lack of playtime is worrying and the base of the faction is very niche, I do not think it would be very successful. -1 Edited July 15 by Anton Link to comment
Bunni Posted July 15 Share Posted July 15 Palestinian faction? Oh shit here we go again... 1 1 Link to comment
Canadian-bacon Posted July 15 Share Posted July 15 User has not logged on in over 2 weeks. Thank you for applying for a faction. Unfortunately your application has been denied. We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted. You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted. 1 Link to comment
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