Fox Posted 6 hours ago Share Posted 6 hours ago (edited) +/- Not a bad application but definitely things to consider. PRO - Different ethnicity - Loved the backstory, (could be more but it was an enjoyable read) CON - Low playtime. It seems you have some sort of grasp on what is required to be a faction leader, but i'd still recommend getting some more time under your belt. - Some of the RP ideas you wrote down seem to be quite generic, could do with being padded out a little and given more explanation - The use of words like storyline and ' Now they're in Liberty City' make me wonder if you wrote this for a FiveM server and have copied and pasted it - You make multiple references to cocaine, when in all likelihood if you got accepted, you wouldn't get the cocaine racket. Edited 6 hours ago by Fox Link to comment
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