nohardfeelings Posted September 24 Share Posted September 24 (edited) Name of Faction: Cartel De tijuana Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 5 and slowly growing Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Famillia Cartel Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): Mexican Name of Character running the faction: Carlos Arellano Felix Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): thatghostmatt Your SteamID:STEAM_0:0:586499021 Your Server playtime: 1mo 1w 5d 16h 6m Do you acknowledge and agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page? (Yes/No): Yes Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned by us? (Yes/No): Yes Provide an example of the unique Roleplay your faction will bring to the server/what type of roleplay we can expect from your faction (Images/Videos Preferred): Images and videos not published sadly. but we planned on starting daily public gatherings, open mic nights, comedy shows, and much more. possibly block parties if everything is goes well. Provide examples or event ideas to promote activity within your faction and keep people interested. (Reference your unique RP from the question above): once we get hands on a building, me and my friends (people apart of cartel de tijuana.) want to host weekly events with everyone in the city, like ufc based fight nights, bar gatherings, possibly open a building for socials and wedding parties, possibly evening cookouts for anyone in the server Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LZYBKcrHbL3JfFuM0b-0cEm1uW-K3PyqIYInuK6k6fc/edit?usp=sharing Edited September 24 by nohardfeelings 11 1 Link to comment
Azoro Posted September 24 Share Posted September 24 Could of course use some grammar improvements in the lore, but I think it has really good bones from what I've seen of them in-game. I also think nohardfeelings has overall been playing long enough and would do good as a leader of a faction. + 1 1 Link to comment
Jmoorsey Posted September 24 Share Posted September 24 I like the idea of another cartel. +1 Link to comment
chingymingy Posted September 24 Share Posted September 24 +1 Are other Hispanics welcome? 1 Link to comment
Fox Posted September 24 Share Posted September 24 +1 Decent app but there are a few 'annoyances' rather than actual issues. PRO: - Decent play time - Diversity, would be great to have another cartel IMO. - Well thought out backstory - Seems like you have a plan going forward and a backstory to rely on. CON - I hate that the font changes at random and random words are in italics? - Wall of text. Images aren't always required but there is a lot of text without any break up. - Grammar could do with some work, as well as the headings could be named better. - You over use words, in this instance the name 'Carlos' appears 45 times. It makes for an easier read if you use 'he' appropriately. If you've already started a sentence with 'Carlos did this' then the next line can be followed with 'he' rather than Carlos again. 1 Link to comment
MxR Posted September 25 Share Posted September 25 -1 wall of texts made it unreadable, I would of liked more to that backstory, however its not bad. We also killed off the cartels 2 years ago, i would not like them to come back 3 2 Link to comment
Darkfire Posted September 25 Share Posted September 25 +1 whole lotta gang shit and you ain’t no Fufu lame. Bring back Cartels you have the backing of La Familia De Leon 2 5 Link to comment
Bunni Posted September 25 Share Posted September 25 +1 Slay we need more cartels! 1 1 Link to comment
Bucket Hat Barry Posted September 25 Share Posted September 25 ?1 I love burritos. 1 2 Link to comment
Unsatisfied Posted September 26 Share Posted September 26 +1 Faction leader is a good man 1 2 2 Link to comment
TucoMF Posted September 27 Share Posted September 27 +1 I think the idea of having more groups in the city is exciting. I know the people behind this, and I believe this could add a lot of depth and intrigue to the city's underground scene. It could bring about new alliances, rivalries, and opportunities, making everything more dynamic and interesting. 2 Link to comment
JagoMF Posted September 28 Share Posted September 28 +1 Let the Cartel make some cash in this city 1 2 Link to comment
James Posted September 29 Share Posted September 29 (edited) we need the cartels back Edited September 29 by James 1 2 1 Link to comment
GlamourPunk Posted September 30 Share Posted September 30 +1 love this idea a lot. would be a good fit for the city 1 2 Link to comment
Kxng Posted October 1 Share Posted October 1 +1 great idea for a faction this is Lou and I support this message 1 Link to comment
Togna Bologna Posted November 10 Share Posted November 10 +1 new rp havent seen a cartel (ig im not old enough) would make me feel like in in a sons of anarchy scene watching the blacks, mexicans, and sos go at it. not italian Link to comment
Jmoorsey Posted November 20 Share Posted November 20 22 hours ago, Bear said: +1 where have you been Link to comment
Natezy__ Posted November 21 Share Posted November 21 +1 Gotta love the cartels don't be doing no Live Leak videos in the forest Link to comment
Bear Posted November 24 Share Posted November 24 On 11/19/2024 at 8:59 PM, Jmoorsey said: where have you been Traveling and working Link to comment
Canadian-bacon Posted December 3 Share Posted December 3 Thank you for applying for a faction. Unfortunately your application has been denied. We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted. You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted. Link to comment
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