Togna Bologna

Hope the revisions were worth considering. Thanks for stopping by

very informative, thanks for stopping by!

You actually know who your father is? wild. And yes I was with Basarab, though I myself did not fail. My position was performed gracefully and so good they actually got upset when I did my job bc I did it so well, they somehow were unable to recover. I'm very happy you were able to put two and two together noticing how it crumbled after I took my leave Thank you for your input.

I have taken some time to recreate another backstory as well as revise the promotional activity event form as well as unique rp ideas to better fit the application. Hope this is something more along the lines of what everyone is looking for when they go to check a backstory related to a cult.

I see your concern with there not being a possible route to be completely neutral, though there are alliances actively who are unaffiliated who are great examples. I can see the point you're making with the slow burn, I don't believe I have worked with enough different companies to say I can speak for everybody's promotion process I am really just excited to bring new rp to the city, and I don't want to be another 3 month faction so I'm really trying to take account for what the community wants to see rather than what I would like to do.

If my vote counts, then +1 New original faction style as well as original backstory tied to the city, and recent enough other people could actually corroborate aspects of it. Wish it had more cult content included in the story, but its probably bc from my perspective most cults don't necessarily promote their ritualistic or ceremonial practices. I am actually really excited for the retainer system to employ its members, I hope it actually works out by maintaining members who actually get paid to work for the organization, and not the other way around Loads of opportunity, though I think the backstory is likely the weakest link of this application simply bc the community seems to want to actually see the rituals and human sacrifices being mentioned or happening. Thank you everyone thus far for the feedback.

I appreciate your support Thank you for sharing. I am unfamiliar w him myself so I dont know how much of a dumb stupidy head he could be

Thank you for sharing. Would you like to share your biggest concern?

I am grateful for the positive feedback I do see the general consensus being concerned with the backstory not incorporating more cult like elements. The original plan was to include general ideas around human sacrifice as well cannibalism though we wanted to have it more hidden on top of a concern of UA not approving the whole idea of cutting up a murdered person and feeding it through the soup kitchen. Rather than telling people we were gonna do that, we figured we would just simply do it. We will absolutely be reevaluating the team as well as the approach for the idea. OPur main concern was wanting to do something original to the server, granted many other organizations have already been done. We have had cartels rise and fall, we have had the mentioned polish, we have jhad Irish, Muslims, etc. We already have Jews, Americans, LOADS of Italians, as well as a rising Spanish and British clan (all the best of luck and wishes to them <3) so we were attempting to do a new approach than recommend something we have already seen done. My main take from this application would be to include more actual details about the cult activity to happen rather than keep it behind closed doors. Again, thank you for the positive feedback

I see where youyr concern is with tasking others with a cleanup of that nature, though i'vve personally had other factions do hits for me as well as celanup. There is market out there, you just havent touched it. I am grateful for your input on the matter though and appreciate your input. I would like to bring a deesirable experience to the city by adding more dynamics to rp between factions Youre absolutely right on Uniqu rp though the examples I did give, if they DO exist in the server today, arent being utilized. All we see around town is minges or dudes on park benches. The retainer itself hasnt been done in the server as a COD method for obtaining items FOR the company rather than have them stand around 20 minutes, hire the guy, then say "hey bring us back X amount of $ by this date or else" leaving newer players with ALL of the new information they've gained just to try and execute everything on thier own. Im not by any means saying lets hold thier hands, but it includes them more directly in tasks Not to mention the proposed "slow-burn" rp where as many places you see or know about have new members who get transferred from other companies, or are old returning players who gaiin membership with no RP or anything like that but are still blessed with management. We aim to combat this by having every single initiate go through the same processes and procedures in order to gauge the initiates skills in order to place them in the correct department.

I can see your concern with the lack of evidence for it being a cult-based organization, though we didn't want to explicitly state the particulars due to the nature of the rituals taking place within the mid-higher ranks as it was to be more secretive than up front with how the cult worships. I appreciate the input Edit: To further elaborate, we do intend to do ritualistic human sacrifices in place of traditional PKs. On top of that , we simply wanted to operate similar to a cult, by leaving out the particulars and promising results you can see. With this being said, the chefs special needs meat in it to be a proper stew

Never watched it, thanks for the constructive criticism though.

-1 only bc we already have bikers let alone ones led by the guy who was directly associated with the currently existing faction. Just doesnt feel like we would get much more variety in the city, and the current biker bar area would have less foot traffic with another location of the same style within the city, and the ideas for activity promotion just seems filled so its not blank. Everyone and their cousin goes to bars and dinner with people whether its just to eat or a company event. Not to mention the organization backstory is an autobiography of the leader.

-1 ngl this app feels thrown together, though I do enjoy the drinking. It feels like the "ideas for rp" is a few screenshots of one good turn out for a pop-up. Backstory lowk feels like a trust-me bro scenario

+1. Ive definately seen them around and love the rp they offer. but another clothing store / bar and lounge? almost a -1. I have seen less playtime run an organization so I dont knock that aspect; and your faction backstory feels like character lore moreso than organization origins, though I wish you al the best of luck

+1 I enjoy the idea of including more fishing as its not utilized too terribly much from my perspective in the server. I also miss boathouse Also very detailed and seems original.

Hey man, I'm not gay but $20 is $20, yamean?

I love the activity always going out outside of Little Israel / Little Italy. Maybe we would be nearby if we do get the opportunity to integerate?

First char ever btw Love the guy.

Constructive criticism is appreciated. The idea of a cult wasn't necessarily the first option, though it is a new flavor or RP in the city compared to everything else we regularly see.

Link to original application file -> Faction Application Format - Google Docs Name of Faction: The Hand of Paimon Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 11 Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Cult Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): American Name of Character running the faction: St. Aldrich Crepsley Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): LimpDickStalker Your SteamID: 76561198172421441 Your Server playtime: 2mo 14h 42m Do you acknowledge and agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page? (Yes/No): (Yes/No) Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned by us? (Yes/No): (Yes/No) Provide an example of the unique Roleplay your faction will bring to the server/what type of roleplay we can expect from your faction (Images/Videos Preferred): (__Revised unique rp examples - Google Docs__) Provide examples or event ideas to promote activity within your faction and keep people interested. (Reference your unique RP from the question above): (__https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lxyCnugq_y6S5R0065I39dRr7CU1GI_S8vVd5XofMWE/edit?tab=t.0__) Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): (__Revised Hand of Paimon Backstory - Google Docs__)

Nice reach goofy, anything youre claiming here doesnt change the fact that you gained knowledge ooc from an ic situation, goofy. It really is a shame you claim to run things when you have maybe an extra hour of playtime since you released the faction application three months ago i think that head got big af off the work of others why you had to be warned for missing the actual cheapest property tax on top on activity warning. Whats next to your claims?

Youre beating around the bush hes a crew leader not up to the task. End if story. I did you a favor, you dont have to thank me. I didnt pk anyone for a movie wym? Was the reason not clear enough or do i gotta spell it out for ya in turkish? The rules clearly state unless otherwise stated all channels in server are considered IC, get right goofy. How is him logging off jnside someone elses property after being specifically told not to metagame on my end? Weird reach but okay. Keepe yappin the proof is in the pudding bbg. I notice they keep bringing up everything besides the point of the ticket. Seems like a therapy sesh imo

I dont have to confess a thing to anyone so word doesnt slip what happens, though yall wanted to press and press his death and found out i in fact did do my job by removing the disrespectful crew leader who btw only recruited a single guy in two full months for his own crew. Im not gonna hold the guys hand im gonna make room for a better replacement. You insist on keeping an incompetent individual in power amd i simply did what any enforver would to to anyone who blatantly disrespected their don in character MULTIPLE TIMES. Do i gotta spell it out? On mike, i never asked where mike was because mike obv was ducking for the last week. And YOU were the ine suggesting via your groupchat we meet in person to settle things and clear the air, not me; so lets not twist the story. I dont need to ask where he is when i see him standing by the vendor and hanging in boatbouse IC to give IC information on where a guy is always seen hanging out. Simple espionage my guy. You were not in city, in character, you knew of nothing. Nice try though. You bitch when youre disrespected by your own member, i say let me tale care of him, you ADMIT YOU GAVE HIM BENIFIT because he was new, then you get mad at me for not afting on it, then i act on it, and im a snake traitor? Very bold claim indeed. P.S ty for admission into the scenario knowing you were in part of this. Really helps the case. Im saying that seeing him alive doesnt mean that he was murdered because you didnt see him later, alligator . ive always had an issue w mike when he blatantly disrespects the don in character as well as YOU and the other crew leader before we lost him. On TOP of that he got a single recruit in TWO FULL MONTHS even when offered cash and firearms license upgrades per quote/recruit for HIS OWN CREW, and is told to collect X amount of this, and doesnt collect a single one as a direct order, then hes obviously got better things to do and as a faction w inactive leaders its not a great look. Making room for active members where possible is in the best interest of the company when its as inactive as you have clearly seen.

This is no proof of anything this is your hearsay and scrambling to avoid your and your lil rag tag groups metagame as thats the literal only way such an inactive faction would survive. The point being in the time stamp when wacht approached me OOCly w mikes death directly after his death means that an individual IC went and told this OOC individual who had not even been online in weeks but to hop in After hearing ooc someone got hit. Very clear, not hard to understand. Youre scrambling for a bullshit excise which isnt plausible as you have no actual proof of anything of your claims. We have legitimate proof of conversation regarding the death as well as the clip that was shared from the death from the eyes of the dead man which was sent ooc to another individual which lead to IC roleplay events. If its too advanced to get through that thick skull just go back to peeling potatos. Here is a screenshot of a clip sent to me minutes after this man was killed, when. Nobody was around the event to have knowledge, which was sent to me by a third party in which the video was shared, oocly. Which was also sent to me oocly which lead to ICly events. W details and everything on a dead mans death. How exactly did this man get details on a mans death when he wasnt even logging in on his character in the city? Since you have so many explanations, lets hear what you have for this one. Here is the link in reference, sent directly from a dead mans eyes from death to an ooc don to an ooc underboss in private dms, not on IC company pager (even then the dead mans final 15minutes are inadmissible for your readons) https://medal.tv/games/garrys-mod/clips/jMyUtLyMfh158KbM0?invite=cr-MSxUdHAsMzQ4MTA5MDE2LA how much of this is also not metad in your twisted perspective?