Kewl

-1 There's a lot you could put in 6 paragraphs, but I feel as though reading the backstory was boring. Your idea of keeping people interested is basically just religious events and boxing matches. Meetings, giving people money to hire, and crew deals aren't anything special, that's just the basics of running a faction. As that section states, "Reference your unique RP from the question above." and the only thing I really get out of that from this is church ceremonies and boxing matches. Religious type events aren't really something that would keep people engaged by the time you get to the third one. People would get tired of standing in a self storage unit pretty quick. Regarding boxing events, I'm pretty sure people already do those. Once again, that would just get boring after the third one. It's really just punching people in the end. While the pictures you included aren't too bad from a photography standpoint, I'm a little confused. First, is this a syndicate or crime family, and why is the Italian flag present in your picture? Regarding the boxing matches, your dupe looks cool, but boxing isn't new or particularly interesting in the long run. I do believe that the playtime could be a little higher aswell. 3 weeks is a lot of time, but learning everything you need to be a successful boss takes time and I don't think you could have really acquired the experience needed for this. Gonna be a -1 from me chat.

-1 i also hold my guns like that one guy in the background story

well now that someone pointed out the "Kostas Crime Syndicate" is "aiming for a legal racket" I guess it's time to make edit #472

you guys out here putting +1 and -1 like it does something lol

-1 not enough time, poor backstory, not very faction leader worthy in terms of knowledge and experience, might last a week

+1 I would love to buy from the cannabis shop! Great event ideas. I also cant wait for the muggings and murder since that happened a lot in the 1900s yk?

For reference, 2 hours after my -1 they changed the name, slightly updated the rank list, and removed the youtube video showcasing RP. For the people who didn't get to see it, he ya go! (Nice Discord Overlay BTW)

-1 Name def needs work, Ranks list on your backstory looks like you spent maybe 3 minutes on it, Playtime could be higher Main reason for my -1 is because I've already had multiple encounters with multiple of the people who make appearances in your video showcasing RP for your faction. The only thing I can say about them is that they are very mingy. Imo this faction wouldn't really last long and seems like it would be run by a group of people who don't know anything about running a faction.

-1 the gas stations aren't even gas stations and I can't wait for people to tell me I cant fill up my tank because im part of an enemy faction also it just seems like an annoyance more than anything else

So basically "I'm a don so I have stuff to do and I shouldn't face the consequences of my actions" right?

-1 I love mexican triads, also cartels have the best history around here guys

+1 more italians in mafia rp, oh marrone