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You actually know who your father is? wild. And yes I was with Basarab, though I myself did not fail. My position was performed gracefully and so good they actually got upset when I did my job bc I did it so well, they somehow were unable to recover. I'm very happy you were able to put two and two together noticing how it crumbled after I took my leave Thank you for your input.

I have taken some time to recreate another backstory as well as revise the promotional activity event form as well as unique rp ideas to better fit the application. Hope this is something more along the lines of what everyone is looking for when they go to check a backstory related to a cult.

I see your concern with there not being a possible route to be completely neutral, though there are alliances actively who are unaffiliated who are great examples. I can see the point you're making with the slow burn, I don't believe I have worked with enough different companies to say I can speak for everybody's promotion process I am really just excited to bring new rp to the city, and I don't want to be another 3 month faction so I'm really trying to take account for what the community wants to see rather than what I would like to do.

If my vote counts, then +1 New original faction style as well as original backstory tied to the city, and recent enough other people could actually corroborate aspects of it. Wish it had more cult content included in the story, but its probably bc from my perspective most cults don't necessarily promote their ritualistic or ceremonial practices. I am actually really excited for the retainer system to employ its members, I hope it actually works out by maintaining members who actually get paid to work for the organization, and not the other way around Loads of opportunity, though I think the backstory is likely the weakest link of this application simply bc the community seems to want to actually see the rituals and human sacrifices being mentioned or happening. Thank you everyone thus far for the feedback.

I appreciate your support Thank you for sharing. I am unfamiliar w him myself so I dont know how much of a dumb stupidy head he could be

Thank you for sharing. Would you like to share your biggest concern?

I am grateful for the positive feedback I do see the general consensus being concerned with the backstory not incorporating more cult like elements. The original plan was to include general ideas around human sacrifice as well cannibalism though we wanted to have it more hidden on top of a concern of UA not approving the whole idea of cutting up a murdered person and feeding it through the soup kitchen. Rather than telling people we were gonna do that, we figured we would just simply do it. We will absolutely be reevaluating the team as well as the approach for the idea. OPur main concern was wanting to do something original to the server, granted many other organizations have already been done. We have had cartels rise and fall, we have had the mentioned polish, we have jhad Irish, Muslims, etc. We already have Jews, Americans, LOADS of Italians, as well as a rising Spanish and British clan (all the best of luck and wishes to them <3) so we were attempting to do a new approach than recommend something we have already seen done. My main take from this application would be to include more actual details about the cult activity to happen rather than keep it behind closed doors. Again, thank you for the positive feedback

I see where youyr concern is with tasking others with a cleanup of that nature, though i'vve personally had other factions do hits for me as well as celanup. There is market out there, you just havent touched it. I am grateful for your input on the matter though and appreciate your input. I would like to bring a deesirable experience to the city by adding more dynamics to rp between factions Youre absolutely right on Uniqu rp though the examples I did give, if they DO exist in the server today, arent being utilized. All we see around town is minges or dudes on park benches. The retainer itself hasnt been done in the server as a COD method for obtaining items FOR the company rather than have them stand around 20 minutes, hire the guy, then say "hey bring us back X amount of $ by this date or else" leaving newer players with ALL of the new information they've gained just to try and execute everything on thier own. Im not by any means saying lets hold thier hands, but it includes them more directly in tasks Not to mention the proposed "slow-burn" rp where as many places you see or know about have new members who get transferred from other companies, or are old returning players who gaiin membership with no RP or anything like that but are still blessed with management. We aim to combat this by having every single initiate go through the same processes and procedures in order to gauge the initiates skills in order to place them in the correct department.

I can see your concern with the lack of evidence for it being a cult-based organization, though we didn't want to explicitly state the particulars due to the nature of the rituals taking place within the mid-higher ranks as it was to be more secretive than up front with how the cult worships. I appreciate the input Edit: To further elaborate, we do intend to do ritualistic human sacrifices in place of traditional PKs. On top of that , we simply wanted to operate similar to a cult, by leaving out the particulars and promising results you can see. With this being said, the chefs special needs meat in it to be a proper stew

Never watched it, thanks for the constructive criticism though.

-1 only bc we already have bikers let alone ones led by the guy who was directly associated with the currently existing faction. Just doesnt feel like we would get much more variety in the city, and the current biker bar area would have less foot traffic with another location of the same style within the city, and the ideas for activity promotion just seems filled so its not blank. Everyone and their cousin goes to bars and dinner with people whether its just to eat or a company event. Not to mention the organization backstory is an autobiography of the leader.

-1 ngl this app feels thrown together, though I do enjoy the drinking. It feels like the "ideas for rp" is a few screenshots of one good turn out for a pop-up. Backstory lowk feels like a trust-me bro scenario

+1. Ive definately seen them around and love the rp they offer. but another clothing store / bar and lounge? almost a -1. I have seen less playtime run an organization so I dont knock that aspect; and your faction backstory feels like character lore moreso than organization origins, though I wish you al the best of luck