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Thank you so much for your constructive criticism I am grateful for the support and hope to exceed expectations I agree, more cult like events in city would absolutely boost our influence. Thus far we have had a handful of cult related events, though none of them have boomed as much as anticipated. We have had successful cleansings / baptizing events as well as a human sacrifice, though I agree; more volume of cult activities would be beneficial to our image.

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Whoa man I don't judge, whatever you get down with you get down with. Am unfamiliar w hentai myself but if that's how you're familiar w them then that's your lane. Not sure if you're incapable of actually reading or just happened to miss one of the roughly four times mentioned, though Paimon is based on an entity known irl through many grimoires and other reading material. Here is a referenced photo of how they're commonly known to appear as. Here is also a link referring to much information regarding this entity -> Paimon: The Complete Demon Profile - The Occultist

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You actually know who your father is? wild. And yes I was with Basarab, though I myself did not fail. My position was performed gracefully and so good they actually got upset when I did my job bc I did it so well, they somehow were unable to recover. I'm very happy you were able to put two and two together noticing how it crumbled after I took my leave Thank you for your input.

I have taken some time to recreate another backstory as well as revise the promotional activity event form as well as unique rp ideas to better fit the application. Hope this is something more along the lines of what everyone is looking for when they go to check a backstory related to a cult.

I see your concern with there not being a possible route to be completely neutral, though there are alliances actively who are unaffiliated who are great examples. I can see the point you're making with the slow burn, I don't believe I have worked with enough different companies to say I can speak for everybody's promotion process I am really just excited to bring new rp to the city, and I don't want to be another 3 month faction so I'm really trying to take account for what the community wants to see rather than what I would like to do.

If my vote counts, then +1 New original faction style as well as original backstory tied to the city, and recent enough other people could actually corroborate aspects of it. Wish it had more cult content included in the story, but its probably bc from my perspective most cults don't necessarily promote their ritualistic or ceremonial practices. I am actually really excited for the retainer system to employ its members, I hope it actually works out by maintaining members who actually get paid to work for the organization, and not the other way around Loads of opportunity, though I think the backstory is likely the weakest link of this application simply bc the community seems to want to actually see the rituals and human sacrifices being mentioned or happening. Thank you everyone thus far for the feedback.

I appreciate your support Thank you for sharing. I am unfamiliar w him myself so I dont know how much of a dumb stupidy head he could be